Foxy Posted January 13, 2005 Report Share Posted January 13, 2005 God this is hard, perhaps the hardest To find the words, I've wanted to say for so long Choking back the tears, and trying to speak They fall out of my mouth, angry and confused This can't go on, the way we are We're killing each other, aren't we? Ripping strength from one another when we touch Two empty shells trying to be human We can't go on, I'm walking away Seeing you stood there waiting for my exit Still and calm, but storms raging inside you Waiting for me to leave. A single tear on your cheek, the one that slipped through Is that enough? One teardrop for us? Run to me, tell me you need me, want me, love me But nothing. No movement. No passion. Be free and happy, my love, for you no longer have me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aunt_Acid Posted January 13, 2005 Report Share Posted January 13, 2005 Nice. It kind of reminds me of Trilogy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko90 Posted January 14, 2005 Report Share Posted January 14, 2005 that was a very nice poem!!! I enjoyed it seems to be overflowing with emotion and meaning to you!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted January 17, 2005 Report Share Posted January 17, 2005 This can't go on, the way we are We're killing each other, aren't we? Ripping strength from one another when we touch Two empty shells trying to be human A single tear on your cheek, the one that slipped through Is that enough? One teardrop for us? Run to me, tell me you need me, want me, love me But nothing. No movement. No passion. Very good, Foxy. Above are my favorite stanzas. Very expressive and touching Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Foxy Posted January 17, 2005 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2005 Thanks for the comments :: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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