Nicolina-Maria29648 Posted December 14, 2004 Report Share Posted December 14, 2004 So for my boyfriend for Christmas, I am making him a scrap book with poems that I have written for him, as well as piecies by other authors, qoutes, song lyrics, pictures, etc. So tonight, we had our secret santa party and I decided that I would give him a hint as to what his present was going to be. I hope you enjoy, and if you have any questions as to what any of the poem is referring to, please feel free to ask! Musings dreams are dreams gone dusty and fading in the purple sunlight it is understandable; why? we?re still here? they?ve left us so deftly ? did we realize they?d even danced by? and in places now empty in wait: a sigh from rose petal lips, a song from snowdrop eyes. i still remember you in a time that didn?t quite always exist. but the pictures still play in cartwheels and summersaults and on pointed toes laughing (if only in my heart). ?reminds me now how i longed for everything and anything of the life i finally know. the intense beauty of a single star dazzled by explosions ?can you hear them falling?? losing ourselves; our minds; and yet not even so. in an instant, there is no right or wrong (or left, for that matter) just the pleasure of moments. and from you, for you and by you i've finally latched on to that invalid dream and twisted it into a long runonsentence to prove a point and be it not clear that onto you everything i bestow know now that you are my only why to reach up and catch a thousand stars. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaeem Posted December 14, 2004 Report Share Posted December 14, 2004 I aM lITTLE bIT wEAK iN English bUT aLL iS vERY nICE. Zimmi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted December 14, 2004 Report Share Posted December 14, 2004 I think your idea for a gift is wonderful and something he will treasure. I don't really like to comment on people's personal work as that is what it is all about - something personal. As long as you are true to your feelings with your words, he's going to love it all! I do think it is really good though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Addictedtoclassic Posted December 14, 2004 Report Share Posted December 14, 2004 You're writing is wonderful and your boyfriend should adore his Christmas gift. Just remember to keep that horse out of Harvard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted December 14, 2004 Report Share Posted December 14, 2004 Very nice Nicolina...it's a great gift because it's heartfelt and original. I hope he appreciates the gift and the giver Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scott-Free Posted December 16, 2004 Report Share Posted December 16, 2004 Your writing simply put, is beautiful.You were able to paint a picture in my head that is so much more than the amount of words on the page....GREAT WORK! FloydtheBarber28@aol.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karhul Posted December 19, 2004 Report Share Posted December 19, 2004 I wrote a poem, you can use it if you want. We have great fun, you make me laugh, Could it be forever?, I think so, You are so beautiful, so divine, I want you in my arms, forever, all the time, I love you my good friend, Please don't leave me here, on my own, I need you here, right by my side, I want every moment with you to last. What do you think?. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolina-Maria29648 Posted December 20, 2004 Author Report Share Posted December 20, 2004 very nice! Thanks, I just might! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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