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Zaeem

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  1. Zaeem

    Dear Daddy

    Its Really very good.But it has some inspiration also.Mean your brother.Nice.Take care and God Bless You.
  2. Its nice and welldone, creativity is a process in which practice is needed a lot, SO keep it up
  3. It's Up to You One song can spark a moment, One flower can wake the dream. One tree can start a forest, One bird can herald spring. One smile begins a friendship, One handclasp lifts a soul. One star can guide a ship at sea, One word can frame the goal. One vote can change a nation, One sunbeam lights a room. One candle wipes out darkness, One laugh will conquer gloom. One step must start each journey, One word must start each prayer. One hope will raise our spirits, One touch can show you care. One voice can speak with wisdom, One heart can know what's true. One life can make the difference, You see, IT'S UP TO YOU!
  4. Great Dream, But Dreams are always dreams.Love is not to get something its to give everything.May Be u agree may be u not.But its my own concept.nice well done. Zimmi
  5. I am the darkness You are a light, I am dull But you are brightness, Really, I am nothing without you. I am alone But you are not, I am cold But you are hot, Really, I am nothing without you. I am the Rain You are a Cloud, I am the wind But you are the Direction, Really, I am nothing without you. I am shy You are bold, When I am annoyed You are to hold, Really, I am nothing without you.
  6. Zaeem

    The Mirror

    Very Very good.I liked it, wish best of luck in future.
  7. ? Hope? Many pleasant moments Many pleasant days, Hope to live alone But not getting the ways. Thousands of dreams Thousands of stars, All are pleasant But all are far. May be I get you May be I accept you, After a long time Could I left you. There is one way There is one rope, To catch the wind To hold the hope. One is for me And one is for you, I don?t know ur path But mine is you. Zaeem Raza. Once Again Posting This.
  8. Zaeem

    Hate my eyes

    Don't lose ur hopes man.Cheer up.Life is full of enjoyment these things are just a little part of it.So enjoy life unless u lose it.Girls are for boys and boys are for girls, Its a fact that every1 will have to realise.Baqi Jaan g,Welldone Keep it up.Take good care of urself.
  9. I think song makes reference to some of the more "Notorious" women in the Bible. Bathsheba, who tempted the king David to kill her husband so he could have her.
  10. Welldone, Nice, Keep it up.
  11. the man who sold the world (Nirvana). Bad boyz have all fun
  12. Dear , its just a wa to show i have joined this site.I should keep in touch with you.Bcas i really need ur hep to improve My English.Thanx.bye.
  13. I aM lITTLE bIT wEAK iN English bUT aLL iS vERY nICE. Zimmi
  14. I want some smiling faces in pictures.Can be children, girls & boys.But plz don't send Vulgar......
  15. Hello mike, All is very pleasent and splendid.Love is like an artist it effaces and educes you.Now jenny's love have effaced and educed ur feelings.well done keep it up.
  16. I hope u?ll be fine Me fine here too I want to know you, but its difficult to catch the waves, I am a little shy You are a confident guy,but She always says too Its difficult to catch the waves, A story of true love A love of true hearts Can?t get the destination,Bcas Its difficult to catch the waves, Now a plan to live alone Not Going inside me I decided to buy a grave, but Its difficult to catch the waves. (Z.Khyal)
  17. I love you Dear Near Friend of mine Your love is like a pure wine, I feel that you are so good to me And I am the one who try to be, May be you have some other skills U can kill a person with these skills, Me also a brand to kill Hey plz apply one of the skills, If I would be die for you My grave will say I Love You. ( Z.Khyal)
  18. Dear Mark, Your effort is really very good and beautiful.Welldone keep it up.
  19. You really answered very nicely, alot of humourous.It showed ur intelligency
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