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Well I wrote this one at my bros, I dunno what its inspired by, I suppose it has the reverse meaning as ZOE JANE by STAIND but I really dont know...anyways tell me what you think guys...thanks! DEAR DADDY: Dear Daddy, You don?t know me, But I remember you I can remember the times you?d come home drunk I can remember mommy always crying, I can remember mommy spending hours masking her bruises, Mommy was always strong, Mommy never wanted to betray you But she went about this wrong? You see mommy couldn?t take it anymore Instead of leaving you, she left the world She couldn?t take your drinking, She couldn?t take your abuse Now I lay here tonight, I mourn the loss of my mother, I lay here and I blame you It was you and your selfishness It was you and you drinking It was you and your abuse It was you and your cheating It was you and your lies! It was ALL YOU!

Actually you would be right on there, that is what I ment by it pretty well exactly

OK, this is my newest one, I took a break from my regular topic of heart break and had a kit-kat! no but here it is, enjoy and feedback please! SOCIETY Sitting here alone, society has won By myself society takes its toll To be me is not cool And to be seen with me is wrong Alone for all these days By myself society has taken its toll Sewn together with lies Woven with deception Glued together with deceit Floored by defeat Alone, society has won Lost in the image of cool I do not fit, a broken fool Only friends when others are not around Played like a game before tossed to the ground By myself society has taken its toll ~Marko

I was wondering you thoughts on this whether it be for or against it, I was also wondering if I could get some websites supporting arguements AGAINST CENSORING MUSIC...as well as som FOR CENSORING MUSIC....I am doing an Essay on it for my English class...thanx guys!

Indie - Smile Empty Soul, Shine Down, 40 Foot Echo Rock - AC/DC, Bryan Adams, Our Lady Peace Hard Rock - Metallica, Seether, Saliva

"Clint Eastwood" - the Gorillaz

that was not bad...apparently you hate the person. this is full of emotion, and is great because of that, Writing is an outlet for your emotions and you have to let it flow with you have done

These guys are pretty good, they have a couple songs out... Save me Brand New Day and others.

Another one of my songs...enjoy Leave Me [Verse 1] In the dark of night, I see you here In the silence of night, I hear you On my tear stained pillow, I bleed you Through my fake smile, you know I need you {Chorus} Leave me, Stop following me Leave me, Stop haunting me Leave me, Stop stalking me Leave me, I need to be free [Verse 2] I miss the times, we?d walk hand-in-hand I miss the hours, you spent in my arms I miss the days, when you were mine I miss the times, you?d say ?I love you? {Chorus} Leave me, Stop following me Leave me, Stop haunting me Leave me, Stop stalking me Leave me, I need to be free [Verse 3] This pain, it?s consuming me This silence, its devastating This Life, doesn?t feel right This world, its all upside down {Chorus} Leave me, Stop following me Leave me, Stop haunting me Leave me, Stop stalking me Leave me, I need to be free ((FADING OUT)) This pain, it?s consuming me This silence, its devastating

Alright, I have fixed it up a bit, changed the first line in the second verse. DREAMING [Verse 1] Since you left, I cannot move on I lay here, I cry from dusk till dawn I try everyday, Try to understand this You come around, wanting to talk Why cant you see, there is nothing to talk about {Chorus} Dreaming is what gets me by, dreaming you never left Tonight doesn?t feel right, I need to hold you tight Without you I fear, I fear what I?ll become Sitting alone, I wonder if you miss me Alone I wonder, if we?ll ever be together again [Verse 2] I cry away today, I guess I?ll cry in tomorrow too Nothing seems to change, you haven?t come back I close my eyes, wishing you?ll appear You never seem to be here, tonight I break into tears You?ve placed me away from you, so I guess I?ll never see {Chorus} Dreaming is what gets me by, dreaming you never left Tonight doesn?t feel right, I need to hold you tight Without you I fear, I fear what I?ll become Sitting alone, I wonder if you miss me Alone I wonder, if we?ll ever be together again [Verse 3] Maybe someday, you can see me walk again Right now nothing is fine, I really do need you I lost that chance, I don?t know how I lost my chance, I don?t know why I lost this chance, now I?m crying Now I?m dying, and now I?m crying Now I?m dying, and now I?m crying Now I?m dying, and now I?m crying

Lets see here... I'd do... first - Pig by Seether Second - When all is said and Done by Trapt Thrid - Silhouttes by Smile Empty Soul Fourth - Made of Glass by Trapt Fifth - Scars by Papa Roach

I will look into changing that. Also it is sad because I have been really down since my Girlfreind left me.

Well, this is my newest peice, I would appreciate it if I could get some comments on it...thank you muchly... DREAMING [Verse 1] Since you left, I cannot move on I lay here, I cry from dusk till dawn I try everyday, Try to understand this You come around, wanting to talk Why cant you see, there is nothing to talk about {Chorus} Dreaming is what gets me by, dreaming you never left Tonight doesn?t feel right, I need to hold you tight Without you I fear, I fear what I?ll become Sitting alone, I wonder if you miss me Alone I wonder, if we?ll ever be together again [Verse 2] Monday has come, I still morn this Nothing seems to change, you haven?t come back I close my eyes, wishing you?ll appear You never seem to be here, tonight I break into tears You?ve placed me away from you, SO I guess I?ll never see {Chorus} Dreaming is what gets me by, dreaming you never left Tonight doesn?t feel right, I need to hold you tight Without you I fear, I fear what I?ll become Sitting alone, I wonder if you miss me Alone I wonder, if we?ll ever be together again [Verse 3] Maybe someday, you can see me walk again Right now nothing is fine, I really do need you I lost that chance, I don?t know how I lost my chance, I don?t know why I lost this chance, now I?m crying Now I?m dying, and now I?m crying Now I?m dying, and now I?m crying Now I?m dying, and now I?m crying

Here is my newest peice, still about my break up... LEFT ME [Verse 1] Now I?m left bleeding You were so misleading Why did you leave this alone? Leaving me here to morn {Chorus} You heart was ice cold Now I have to break this mold You left me wondering why Taking all ability for me to fly All I have left to do is cry [Verse 2] You tore my heart out Leaving a hole, This is taking its tole You took that knife, You put it right through There is nothing left for me to do {Chorus} You heart was ice cold Now I have to break this mold You left me wondering why Taking all ability for me to fly All I have left to do is cry [Verse 3] How can you say this is so right? When it only feels wrong You took me, and you shook me I have been sent for a loop {Chorus} You heart was ice cold Now I have to break this mold You left me wondering why Taking all ability for me to fly All I have left to do is cry ((Fading out)) How can you say this is so right? When it only feels wrong (((REPEAT 2x)))

how bout DOGS DIE IN THE BACK SEAT OF CARS that one is truely hilarious!!! ::

This song has a lot of meaning to me...and I am sure for you too RBB because you and I have been thru almost the exact same things! everything i've been thru is alot similar to you, the music, the aftermath, the break up and EVERYTHING!! in closing this was AMAZING!!!

I like this song, it is pretty good with something I can somewhat relate to right now...its not a song I'd go out of my way to listen to...but if its on I'd listen to it and enjoy it.

As for this being the 'FIRST HAPPY SONG EVER HERE' thats wrong...there are many here...here are 2 of mine... LOVE IN YOU I lay here Pieces of me everywhere I lay in wait In wait of you You to love me Glancing at a far Hoping our eyes will meet I see your pain I feel your pain Do you know I exist? Or do you even care? I have placed love in you Only you shall find it For I belong to you There is nothing greater then you Love is what I longed for, Love is what I found in you, You are the only one I love! Verse 1] I've walked through the valley of the shadow of death I've felt the pain of losing everything I've been pushed towards the gun I've been down, I've been kicked, I've been hated {Chorus} All the pain I've felt, all the hate I've felt All the anguish I've felt campares nothing to the love I have when I hold you tight. <<>> [Verse 2] I hold you in my arms, and I float away, my pain is nothing, I am in my own world, my love for you overcomming all pain The only thing that is keeping me from falling apart is you love, your love is the glue to my heart... all my life people have been breaking me down, then you come along and nothing seems to hurt anymore {Chorus} All the pain I've felt, all the hate I've felt All the anguish I've felt campares nothing to the love I have when I hold you tight. <<>> [Verse 3] All the times people have hated me, all the times people have played me down, everytime I fall, I hit hard ground... now, I hit your love and bounce back to reality. {Chorus} All the pain I've felt, all the hate I've felt All the anguish I've felt campares nothing to the love I have when I hold you tight. this last one may seem grim...but it is telling the person how much I loved them... :guitar:

1 - Trapr 2 - Smile Empty Soul 3 - Breaking Benjamin 4 - Story of the Year 5 - Saliva 6 - Three Days Grace 7 - Evanescence 8 - Seether 9 - Crossfade 10 - RBB (from this Form)

I LOVE these guys there awesome, they sing the song "SILHOUTTES" which is an AMAZING song... Smile Empty Soul's Homepage

I think it is an amazing song, I think it is a guy second guessing breaking up with someone because it was done out of emotion...like a HUGE fight or something...

Well to tell you honestly...GREAT the thing I like about it its filled with emotion and passion, it is strong but not over the top strong, it has the right flow, it has everything that was very well done :guitar:

LOVE STINKS - ADAM SANDLER...my personal opinon...I dont need to go into details everyone already should know why

Yeah, I have, a couple of them...look around for them...

I would have to say my opinon of best lyrics ever would have to go to Trapt they are amazing lyrically...imparticularly "Made Of Glass" its my favorite song right now... TITLE: Made of Glass ARTIST: Trapt [sPONSOR] I don't know anything at all and I'm somebody else It could take years to find you, it could years to find myself And I don't need to hear your answer I just need you to see That I think it's time to break down these walls that we throw Am I still breathing have I lost that feeling Am I made of glass 'cause you see right through me I don't know who I am and you're the only one who sees that I can't ask these questions that cannot be answered today And even if everything goes wrong and we start to fall apart I will understand where you are, I will understand this by myself And I don't need to hear your answer I just need you to feel Like there are no boundaries at all And how far have we come, too far to throw away the past Will you be there waiting for me I have to ask what we are, if I ask today it just won't last So I'll be here waiting for you Will we ever feel this good again - Not today Will we ever feel this real again - Not today Will you ever be mine again - Not today Will we ever feel this real again - Not today I love this song!!!!!!!!!!!!! :guitar: