pink_bubbles

Hey please tell me what you think cause i ant to post this poem to someone and i want it to sound perfect... ..::Little Girl::.. Too many dreams shatter to tiny pieces, that you can not find. Too many promises thrown away, and forgotten. All that time you were gone, a little girl waited for your return. You missed birthdays and moments that come only once. Everyone was still waiting for you. Everyone knew what kept you there. But the little girl didn't know. You promised, but you forgot. You placed trust in a little heart, then took it away. You told the truth, but you lied. When you last saw her, she was of only 9, she shall be 16 soon. That has been five years. Five years of broken promises. Five years of lies. Five years of drowned hope. Five years of memories lost. Five years of a childhood. You never saw. While everyone else waits for you, I wont. I am the little girl, you never saw grow. I am the little girl, who lost hope.

Wow. I really liked it. Great work, keep it up.

It is not that I'm hiding something, it is that there is the turth out there and things we believe are lies and we don't even know it. Did what i just say make sense?

Truth In disguise, hiding from the real world. Not wanting to know the facts, disincline to everything around. In hide-out so no one will find, very high strung from what is around. The truth is screened off, everything we believe is lies. The truth is not free. The truth no one will ever find. Thanks xx

umm... well im new here and yeah lol heres a poem i wrote awhile ago Moving On You sat me down and talked and talked. Who do you think you are? Now it is your turn to listen to what I have to say. You seemed so innocent and ever so sugary sweet, but I was blind not to see. At first I was your princess - your girl, the along the line there was a fault. I cry these black tears, the blackest tears, all because of you. Its your fault not mine, I shall not cry. Im gonna put on a smile, now Im stronger than I ever was. You have made me so mad, I do not regret. You have made me who I am. I can breathe in peace; I have put up with your [bleep] too long. I am leaving, sealing the door. Never to haunt me again. please rate it thanks!!!