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Mairi
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New poem by me, written last night. Comments please.

Ugliest

I gaze into the motionless pond

Out of spite, not vanity

I look younger

More naïve

Easily decieved

No make-up: natural

My face, a blank canvas

because it's so much easier to hate myself

when i'm at my ugliest

I look down at the image trapped

Out of morbid fascination

I look like i always do

Fatter than her

Bigger than her

No muscle: just putrid flab

my body, a hideous monster

because it's so much easier to hate myself

when i'm at my ugliest

I look deeper to find the soul reflected within

Out of wistful instinct

I look at the bigger picture

I'm human

I have emotions

No magical forcefield:I hurt

My soul dented by your insults

because it's so much easier for you to hate me

Hate me more than yourselves

when i'm at my ugliest.

Comments most appriciated please.

:rockon:

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I liked it, but it doesn't make me feel happy.

I think I'm ugly too, but people told me that i'm not. I used to get so depressed because I thought I was so ugly. Everyone is almost never satisfied with themselves.

I look deeper to find the soul reflected within,

Out of wistful instinct

I love this line of it.

It's speaks about how I feel about myself sometimes.

Well done Mairi.

Don't take this the wrong way, but I'd like to see a happy poem from you, it would be really good!!!.

:rockon:

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Oh, mairi, I saw your pictures on the Photograph Thread and I wouldn´t say you´re ugly at all... could it be I need glasses??? :stars:

See, I´m concerned about my sight more than about your poem! :laughing: :laughing:

I did like your poem very much. I guess the mirror is reflecting your feeling... :thumbsup:

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Mairi...Why so sad?...very well written, you are expressing your feelings, which is good....you obviously have talent and that's something to feel good about...if writing makes you feel good, than I bet there are some positive feelings inside of you, I'd like to see that in your writings, and I bet they would be beautiful.....

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