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THE LONELY ROAD

As I walk down this road

All I can feel is this weight grow

I walk and walk, but I go nowhere

When I see my destination I stumble before getting there

People pass me by,

They don?t even know I?m alive

I only wish I could reach my destination.

Now, road blocks are up on the lines

It seems I?ve fallen into more lies

As I follow this unfamiliar detour I cannot see

I don?t know if this is where I want to be

Finally, your light shines my way

No I may see as if it were day

I reach out to you, but my hand hits wall

As this floor drops out, I fall

Then the light fades, and everything becomes?black

I long for you to come back to me

As I cry I fall to my knees

This journey inst worth following without your light

As I kneel crying, face in my hands

Your light comes back to me again

I reach out to you, the wall falls?

I now realize that my destination was never anywhere

It wasn?t here nor there, it was right here!

GET THE F*** AWAY!

When I first met you, you were prefect

I was filled with happiness

Now as we grow together

All I feel is like a sack of [bleep]

What they say is true?

Love is blind

When I first met you, were inseparable

Now when your around I want you to?

GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!

You don?t know the pain you?ve caused me,

I was a sure handed quarterback

Now it is self-esteem I lack

So now all I want is for you to?

GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!

You?d say ?I love you?

Then promptly turn around and say the same thing to my best friend

You two never thought I?d ever know?BUT I DO!

So the only thing I have to say to you both is?

GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!

Your deceit is too much for me to handle

Your lies have become unforgivable!

Our live is DEAD!

So just please?

GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!

I was the victim caught in the undertow

I was the victim of Robbery

I was the victim of a Tornado

I say to you now?

GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!

You lied to me (GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!)

You deceived me (GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!)

You cheated me (GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!)

You stole my love (GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!)

You tossed me aside (GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!)

You used me (GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!)

You call me?I don?t answer?

You say we need to talk?

I say we don?t have anything to talk about?

Though before you leave I want you to hear this?

You lied, you cheated, you deceived me, and for that?

I [bleep] HATE YOU?WONT YOU PLEASE GET THE [bleep] OUT!!!!!

BROKEN HOME

[VERSE 1]

Is success a mere elusion?

Or is it just with me?

Every attempt I?ve made at success and make you proud?

It fails?

That ?A??(Should have been an A plus)

That game with 6 tackles?(should have been 10!)

The girl of my dreams?(should have been prettier)

{CHORUS}

Every time I try to be better?

It isn?t?IT NEVER IS!! IT NEVER WILL BE!!

If all my attempts fail?why try?

So dad to you I say?

I?m sorry I?m not perfect

I?m sorry I?m not to your liking

I?m sorry?but?I am leaving?I can?t live like this anymore!!

[VERSE 2]

The first place at the science fair?(should have been better)

The second place in the marathon?(should have been FIRST!)

I?ve tried, and tried but I cannot win in this endless game!

I hate you?(but I don?t)?

I love you?(but I don?t)?

I want to stay?(but I don?t)?

I want to leave?(but I don?t)?

{CHORUS}

Every time I try to be better?

It isn?t?IT NEVER IS!! IT NEVER WILL BE!!

If all my attempts fail?why try?

So dad to you I say?

I?m sorry I?m not perfect

I?m sorry I?m not to your liking

I?m sorry?but?I am leaving? I can?t live like this anymore!!

[VERSE 3]

I never thought I?d see the day that I wanted away?

But since moms left you haven?t been the same!

I want to run away?(but I don?t)?

I want to stay?(but I don?t)?

I wish my thoughts would be come straight and I knew what to do!

I wish mom was still around but she?s not because you drove her away!

You and your drinking! You and your yelling?you and your Cheating!

LOOK WHAT YOU?VE DONE TO THIS FAMILY!

YOU WILL NEVER KNOW THE HARDSHIP WE?VE BEEN THOUGH!

THE FINNANCIAL BURDEN YOU?VE CAUSED!!

Why do you have to be so difficult!

You call me the disgrace!

{CHORUS}

Every time I try to be better?

It isn?t?IT NEVER IS!! IT NEVER WILL BE!!

If all my attempts fail?why try?

So dad to you I say?

I?m sorry I?m not perfect

I?m sorry I?m not to your liking

I?m sorry?but?I am leaving? I can?t live like this anymore!!

[VERSE 4]

you have run my name through the mud!

You have destroyed my confidence?

You have ended all things good for me!

You have gone and messed me up!

And yet you still don?t care!

Go ahead dad?have another one!

All you care about is Jack Daniels!

{CHORUS}

Every time I try to be better?

It isn?t?IT NEVER IS!! IT NEVER WILL BE!!

If all my attempts fail?why try?

So dad to you I say?

I?m sorry I?m not perfect

I?m sorry I?m not to your liking

I?m sorry?but?I am leaving? I can?t live like this anymore!!

[VERSE 5]

Now, I stand here looking down at you?

I knew this day was going to come?

I knew cancer was going to play a role in this!

I hated you?(but I don?t)?

I loved you?(but I don?t)?

I want you around?(but I don?t)?

I want you to be here today?(but I don?t)?

I can?t take this anymore! All my conflicts within?

They have taken its toll on me!!

{CHORUS}

Every time I try to be better?

It isn?t?IT NEVER IS!! IT NEVER WILL BE!!

If all my attempts fail?why try?

So dad to you I say?

I?m sorry I?m not perfect

I?m sorry I?m not to your liking

I?m sorry?but?I am leaving? I can?t live like this anymore!!

[VERSE 6]

I know you wanted the best for me?

I know you wanted me to be good?

I know you wanted me to succeed?

But I needed to succeed my way?

I need to be the best I wanted to be?

I wanted to be good at my own things?

I wanted to decided my OWN life?

I didn?t want it predetermined by you!

{CHORUS}

Every time I try to be better?

It isn?t?IT NEVER IS!! IT NEVER WILL BE!!

If all my attempts fail?why try?

So dad to you I say?

I?m sorry I?m not perfect

I?m sorry I?m not to your liking

I?m sorry?but?I am leaving? I can?t live like this anymore!!

THE END

There was a time we were so Tight

Now our time is spent to fight

Is this what we?ve come to?

What else can we do?

[Chorus]

I guess this is the end

I?m no longer considered your friend

All this time I was used

I was oblivious to the news

YOUR no longer MY friend

{Verse 2}

You never had my back

I now see the friendship you lack

I fell into you little game

Now I feel that your lame

You messed me all for a dame

[Chorus]

I guess this is the end

I?m no longer considered your friend

All this time I was used

I was oblivious to the news

YOUR no longer MY friend

{Spoken Bridge}

I should have seen it coming!

Am I really THAT blind?

I don?t believe this!

One day friends?

Next day Enemies!

How did this happen?

Now I sit here alone?

Thinking?

{Verse 3}

I think of the times you led me astray

You?d lie without a delay

I think of the times you played me

I can?t believe my own stupidity prevented me to see

[Chorus]

I guess this is the end

I?m no longer considered your friend

All this time I was used

I was oblivious to the news

YOUR no longer MY friend

WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?

[Verse #1]

One-minute kids are having fun

Next silenced by a gun

All connected with the same inspiration

All to get an education

{Chorus}

What were you thinking

Were you drinking?

When you put that bullet into that kids head!

In one shot, that kid was dead!

[Verse #2]

One victim shot because he was black

One kid shooting because he?s whack

One victim running

One kid gunning

{Chorus}

What were you thinking

Were you drinking?

When you put that bullet into that kids head!

In one shot, that kid was dead!

[Verse #3]

few escaped with there lives

everybody cries for the wives

of the teacher who dies

the scene was obscene

everybody screams

{Chorus}

What were you thinking

Were you drinking?

When you put that bullet into that kids head!

In one shot, that kid was dead!

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Thank you man...some dont think so...but I do what I do, if they dont like me, bite me! thats what I say to them, but I do appreciate that man, I enjoy critcism whether good or bad, I feel it helps me get better, and i've been writing for about a year

anyways,

peace out hombres

Marko :rockon:

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You are a very skilled writer, the songs you have posted here are filled with emotion and flow wonderfully. I only have 9 songs at this current moment (a 10th in the works) only because I suffered from writer's block from March 14 to July 19 when I was able to write my 6th song (I only had 3 poems in between too).

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I have quite a few lyrical influences...

Linkin Park, Good Charlotte, Evanescence, 3 Days Grace, Papa Roach, Simple Plan, Seether, 3 Doors Down, Our Lady Peace, Disturbed, Velvet Revolver (to an extent), the Tea Party, Hoobastank...and counting...its basically pends on my mood that particular day, if I'm sad i write songs like "BROKEN HOME", if I'm mad I write songs like "GET THE F*** OUT", if I'm lost or confused I write songs like "THE LONELY ROAD"

I used to write love songs, but recently got out of that, dispite the fact I have a Girlfreind which I've been going out with for almost a year, she has been wondering why I've been writting like thats, and I have no answer, its just what flows, its what some people somwhere have to deal with, and if my lyrics help them thru a situation...AWESOME!

Anyways hombres

Peace out

:drummer: Marko :drummer:

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Mark, I know your work, your influences, and you. The songs are really good, they all have a different meaning, and a different vibe and variation of lyrical content. The stuff is very good I must say. Keep on working man.

Rob

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