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Evelyn

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  1. my grandfather has the book . ..i suggest getting it, its a good read on a rainy day.
  2. this is a form of formal poetry, with the words at the end repeated throughout the seven stanza, and it sometimes seems like it's rhyming. i'd love feedback. He asks her to dance. She can’t refuse and she stares at the hem of her dress As he thinks about her and how she looks. She scans her friends enjoying their time. His head doesn’t have control over his feet, As he leads her to the dirt floor. She’s daydreaming as her ivory skirts sweeps the floor. He is entranced as they dance. She’s avoiding his glance as he steps on her feet. He pulls her closer as they swirl and out fans her dress. She wants to speed up time, As he glances at his friends for encouraging looks. He wishes she would understand what is behind his looks. She wants to melt into the floor He wills the slowing of time Slowly she notices others begin to dance. He holds the soft waist of her mother of pearl-colored dress. She misses a step and wants to have bare feet. He hopes that the music is going the same tempo as his feet. The way he turns to her makes her want to meet his look. He sees the way she twirls her cream-colored dress. She stops looking at the floor. He realizes that she has begun to dance, And they both will the slowing of time. He suddenly grasps that their time Together is coming to a close, and the heels of her feet Touch the floor, and they stop their dance. This time, she is the one who looks, And she wants to be kicking up dust on the floor. He looks and realizes their dances has stopped fanning out her dress. As they walk back to the crowd her dress Swings back and forth, but nothing compare to when they kept time, Doing their dance on the dirt floor, With the tempo in time with their feet. The crowd had looked; As they spun by, together in their dance. He watches as she walks the swinging of her dress, and they both drag their feet, They enjoyed their time, and she misses his looks. He stares longingly at the floor, and asks another girl to dance.
  3. the same thing is true in new england. one day, it was that humdity like before the storm, and it was sunny, and an hour later, it was pouring down rain and thundering with dark cloud. An hour later, it was sunny and still rain. But no rainbow showed up, though.
  4. oh, sorry. I love that line too. Did you see the commerical for cable making fun of it?
  5. All I have to say is "Buler? Buler?" (I probably spelled it wrong) (sorry if anyone else already said it.)
  6. this one little problem with that . . .it's sort of impossible.
  7. Evelyn

    rent

    thanks broadway cast was amazing minus the mimi. horrible voice.
  8. Evelyn

    rent

    i can't find it! do you know what page it's on?
  9. bring me to life - evanscence There she is again,talkin’ on the phone Just like me hates to be alone
  10. Evelyn

    Song Game II

    Norwegian wood - Beatles
  11. i have a really sick minded one - Mrs. Robinson i heard "she's a slut more then you will know." it's actually "jesus loves you more then you will know". and then "heaven holds a place for whores who pray" it's actually "heaven holds a place for those who pray" . . .
  12. Evelyn

    rent

    i don't know quite where this belongs, so i put it here. My question is: who has seen rent and what did they think of it? rent the broadway version or the movie. And what about tick tick . . .boom?
  13. i've never been embarrased in my knickers. my boyfriend loves it. lol. i honestly would walk around in my underwear if it was legal and warm enough. i hate clothes.
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