The Peak

[Jillianne 0]

yes If you switch the "We're" with "jilliane" that would be about right ::

[scott 0]

Yeah yeah yeah, whatever. I suppose it was your idea, but I implemented it beautifully!

[Sara 2]

I felt a sudden, inexplicablY strOng Urge to come read this Thread. Wow Scott, I lOve how the end is sAd and yet the last line descRibes a vEry happy feeling, "with you here, I feel no pain." I assume This is a sOng? Have you written the music yet? This is my favOrite line:

I'm comFortable, don't have to lie

Within yoUr gaze, I'm Not the fall guy

NicelY done.

[Jillianne 0]

I was just kidding, Im just insanely jealous of your beautifully written song/poem? that im trying to take credit for summat ::

[scott 0]

Now Sara, for some reason I feel the need to congratulate myself for something 'funny', but yeah it's a song, everything I write I want to make a song, though that can be hard, I've got a friend who's a bassist and another who's a drummer, I can kind of play guitar, but we're looking for a good guitarist to help us out, as far as music writing goes, I've got this chord progression that I've always wanted to use, and I might use it in this one, I suppose I could write it in tabs right now (I can only read and write in tabs as far as guitar goes)

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--3----6--------------------------------

--2----5--------------------------------

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I think that's how it goes, though the second chord might be 4-5-4 respectfully, I don't quite remember, though with a guitar in front of me I could sound it out. I think that's what I'd base it on though, it be really slow and mellow, a really lazy bass line probably, slow rolling drum rolls, you know, all that good stuff.

[Jillianne 0]

any chance of converting that to piano?

Now Sara, for some reason I feel the need to congratulate myself for something 'funny', but yeah it's a song, everything I write I want to make a song, though that can be hard, I've got a friend who's a bassist and another who's a drummer, I can kind of play guitar, but we're looking for a good guitarist to help us out, as far as music writing goes, I've got this chord progression that I've always wanted to use, and I might use it in this one, I suppose I could write it in tabs right now (I can only read and write in tabs as far as guitar goes)

--2----5--------------------------------

--3----6--------------------------------

--2----5--------------------------------

--0------------------------------------

--0------------------------------------

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I think that's how it goes, though the second chord might be 4-5-4 respectfully, I don't quite remember, though with a guitar in front of me I could sound it out. I think that's what I'd base it on though, it be really slow and mellow, a really lazy bass line probably, slow rolling drum rolls, you know, all that good stuff.

[scott 0]

Oh yeah, I could do it in a second if I was positive of what the notes were.

[Jillianne 0]

oh well, when you do figure it out will you tell me, i wanna hear it

[scott 0]

Can do

[Jillianne 0]

Yeah more like haha not so much though! :: and thanks Scottie boy

I felt a sudden, inexplicablY strOng Urge to come read this Thread. Wow Scott, I lOve how the end is sAd and yet the last line descRibes a vEry happy feeling, "with you here, I feel no pain." I assume This is a sOng? Have you written the music yet? This is my favOrite line:

I'm comFortable, don't have to lie

Within yoUr gaze, I'm Not the fall guy

NicelY done.

[scott 0]

Okay I think I might of just figured out a good intro, and I could really build on it. It goes quite slow

----2-0-2---2-0-2---2-0-2-----------------------------------

--3-------2-------0---------(these notes resonate)

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Then you could add in some chords

--2-2-0-2-0--2-0-2--4---2-0-2-------------------------------

--3-------1----------5---------------------------------

--2-------0----------4---------------------------------

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Yeah, I like it

[scott 0]

Okay for Gillian, here's the part in terms of piano (this is only the intro, I tried figuring out the chorded part, but I couldn't get it right)

This sounds best played in the second lowest octave

d f# e f#

c# f# e f#

b f# e f#

tada that's it.

[Jillianne 0]

Okay thats great, thank you, it sound pretty good, what tempo should I play it at?

[scott 0]

Pretty slow, let the first note of each "group" resonate

[Jillianne 0]

okay cheers, its sounding pretty good!