Jillianne Posted July 8, 2004 Report Posted July 8, 2004 yes If you switch the "We're" with "jilliane" that would be about right ::
scott Posted July 8, 2004 Author Report Posted July 8, 2004 Yeah yeah yeah, whatever. I suppose it was your idea, but I implemented it beautifully!
Sara Posted July 8, 2004 Report Posted July 8, 2004 I felt a sudden, inexplicablY strOng Urge to come read this Thread. Wow Scott, I lOve how the end is sAd and yet the last line descRibes a vEry happy feeling, "with you here, I feel no pain." I assume This is a sOng? Have you written the music yet? This is my favOrite line: I'm comFortable, don't have to lie Within yoUr gaze, I'm Not the fall guy NicelY done.
Jillianne Posted July 8, 2004 Report Posted July 8, 2004 I was just kidding, Im just insanely jealous of your beautifully written song/poem? that im trying to take credit for summat ::
scott Posted July 8, 2004 Author Report Posted July 8, 2004 Now Sara, for some reason I feel the need to congratulate myself for something 'funny', but yeah it's a song, everything I write I want to make a song, though that can be hard, I've got a friend who's a bassist and another who's a drummer, I can kind of play guitar, but we're looking for a good guitarist to help us out, as far as music writing goes, I've got this chord progression that I've always wanted to use, and I might use it in this one, I suppose I could write it in tabs right now (I can only read and write in tabs as far as guitar goes) --2----5-------------------------------- --3----6-------------------------------- --2----5-------------------------------- --0------------------------------------ --0------------------------------------ --0------------------------------------ I think that's how it goes, though the second chord might be 4-5-4 respectfully, I don't quite remember, though with a guitar in front of me I could sound it out. I think that's what I'd base it on though, it be really slow and mellow, a really lazy bass line probably, slow rolling drum rolls, you know, all that good stuff.
Jillianne Posted July 8, 2004 Report Posted July 8, 2004 any chance of converting that to piano? Now Sara, for some reason I feel the need to congratulate myself for something 'funny', but yeah it's a song, everything I write I want to make a song, though that can be hard, I've got a friend who's a bassist and another who's a drummer, I can kind of play guitar, but we're looking for a good guitarist to help us out, as far as music writing goes, I've got this chord progression that I've always wanted to use, and I might use it in this one, I suppose I could write it in tabs right now (I can only read and write in tabs as far as guitar goes) --2----5-------------------------------- --3----6-------------------------------- --2----5-------------------------------- --0------------------------------------ --0------------------------------------ --0------------------------------------ I think that's how it goes, though the second chord might be 4-5-4 respectfully, I don't quite remember, though with a guitar in front of me I could sound it out. I think that's what I'd base it on though, it be really slow and mellow, a really lazy bass line probably, slow rolling drum rolls, you know, all that good stuff.
scott Posted July 8, 2004 Author Report Posted July 8, 2004 Oh yeah, I could do it in a second if I was positive of what the notes were.
Jillianne Posted July 8, 2004 Report Posted July 8, 2004 oh well, when you do figure it out will you tell me, i wanna hear it
Jillianne Posted July 8, 2004 Report Posted July 8, 2004 Yeah more like haha not so much though! :: and thanks Scottie boy I felt a sudden, inexplicablY strOng Urge to come read this Thread. Wow Scott, I lOve how the end is sAd and yet the last line descRibes a vEry happy feeling, "with you here, I feel no pain." I assume This is a sOng? Have you written the music yet? This is my favOrite line: I'm comFortable, don't have to lie Within yoUr gaze, I'm Not the fall guy NicelY done.
scott Posted July 8, 2004 Author Report Posted July 8, 2004 Okay I think I might of just figured out a good intro, and I could really build on it. It goes quite slow ----2-0-2---2-0-2---2-0-2----------------------------------- --3-------2-------0---------(these notes resonate) ------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------ Then you could add in some chords --2-2-0-2-0--2-0-2--4---2-0-2------------------------------- --3-------1----------5--------------------------------- --2-------0----------4--------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------- Yeah, I like it
scott Posted July 8, 2004 Author Report Posted July 8, 2004 Okay for Gillian, here's the part in terms of piano (this is only the intro, I tried figuring out the chorded part, but I couldn't get it right) This sounds best played in the second lowest octave d f# e f# c# f# e f# b f# e f# tada that's it.
Jillianne Posted July 9, 2004 Report Posted July 9, 2004 Okay thats great, thank you, it sound pretty good, what tempo should I play it at?
scott Posted July 9, 2004 Author Report Posted July 9, 2004 Pretty slow, let the first note of each "group" resonate
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