Sweet Jane 61 Posted November 16, 2005 Report Share Posted November 16, 2005 I was so on love at least I thought I was at the young age of 13. And at that age I was not allowed to date but football games where a great place to be together if only for a couple of hours. And at 13 that meant the world. That is where this poem came from, a wonderful time and memeory. Knowing Love It was a late fall night... The stands filled with cheering fans But neither of us saw them in our world In the distance sounds of football unfurled. Your strong hand grasping mine... feeling rough, yet wonderful our fingers interlocking tightly the crisp air numbing our cheeks slightly. Little whispers to make me laugh... the night was ours to share, these moments to steal and save feelings hitting like a tidal wave. You pulled me closer... your arms wrapping snuggly around me, my heart pounding ever so fast wanting this moment to last. Tenderly you kissed my lips... lasting for an eternity I thought, you pulled back with a mischievous smile... and I knew why I loved you all this while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel2Velvet Posted November 16, 2005 Report Share Posted November 16, 2005 Ahhh.. that first love. So fresh and innocent. Good piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucky Posted November 17, 2005 Report Share Posted November 17, 2005 Jane I've been to that place. Memories. This is really well written. You're good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted November 18, 2005 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2005 Thanks you for the nice comments Ron and CeeCee...I wish I could write more than I do...I always feel such a release when I do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Joe Posted November 21, 2005 Report Share Posted November 21, 2005 Ahhh.. that first love. So fresh and innocent. Good piece. Ron!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel2Velvet Posted November 21, 2005 Report Share Posted November 21, 2005 LOLOLOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Laurie_ Posted November 21, 2005 Report Share Posted November 21, 2005 lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucky Posted November 22, 2005 Report Share Posted November 22, 2005 ^^^ here I thought he was such a nice guy!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HaVeAgReEnDaY Posted December 4, 2005 Report Share Posted December 4, 2005 that is amazing! i wanna write like that! yay! baby! lol... sorry... i do know what love feels like.. it kinda sux... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brippa Posted December 4, 2005 Report Share Posted December 4, 2005 aaw Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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