Letter to god

[Ender]

I havent talked to you

since my mother died

That was months ago

and everynight ive cried

But i havent died yet

even though ive tried

i know this might seem odd

but im writing me a letter

and im sending it to god

im addressing it to hell

because its what i went through

I just have to tell

what i think of you

So when you read my letter

tell her i say hi

and ill see her again

when life passes me bye

i know this might seem odd

but im writing me a letter

and im sending it to god

i know shes happy where she is

but i think every mom

wants to be with her kids

so i end by saying this

love your mom and dad

and love the one your with

i know this might seem odd

but im wrote me a letter

and i sent it to god

[edna]

Hi, Ender! I like your poem very much... I don´t know if it´s about some personal experience but it touched me. It´s simple and so touching...

[Mairi]

That was very touching, Ender.

[she_screams_in_silence]

well hello there!

[Karhul]

God has a capital "G" in it.

Great poem!!!.

[Jenny]

Touching, sad and sweet. Good work, Ender

[Uncle Joe]

Umm, Gen and Mairi...I don't think we're allowed to have two Glaswegians (Glasgowians?) posting consecutively. You're tying up the Scottish internet.

Now before you go beating up on me....just kidding!

[edna]

Umm, Gen and Mairi...I don't think we're allowed to have two Glaswegians (Glasgowians?) posting consecutively. You're tying up the Scottish internet.

[Addictedtoclassic]

It's good, but the line "But I'm writing me a letter" doesn't quite sound right with the word "me" in it. I do like how you bring in a happy statement with the sadness and anger being felt throughout.