CaptainMikeRS 0 Posted August 21, 2004 Report Share Posted August 21, 2004 This is my eigth song (I'm not posting in order). It's a short progressive rock song, guitar is powerful in this but the bass is more of the lead instrument. I would really appreciate some comments. Beach of Memories (Written August 15, 2004 by Mike R. Smale) Tales of long ago, are reflected in the sand. The seeds that the present sow, echo throughout this land. Images of days gone by, come to life along the shore. Showing every truth and lie, and days of peace and war. The Beach of Memories, everyday we live is here. The Beach of Memories, every laugh and every tear. The lightest hours, the darkest sins. What's exposed here shall happen again. The Beach of Memories, every laugh and every tear. The Beach of Memories, of every hour, of every year, everyday we live is here. Link to post Share on other sites
Danielj 1 Posted August 28, 2004 Report Share Posted August 28, 2004 You are great. That was very Original. something lacking a bit these days Link to post Share on other sites
Aunt_Acid 1 Posted August 30, 2004 Report Share Posted August 30, 2004 I would love to hear that with music. Link to post Share on other sites
_Annabelle_ 0 Posted August 30, 2004 Report Share Posted August 30, 2004 I thought it was excellent, very well written and wonderfully poetic. Great job! . Link to post Share on other sites
boingobaby 0 Posted August 30, 2004 Report Share Posted August 30, 2004 Very nice Link to post Share on other sites
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