CaptainMikeRS 0 Report post Posted August 21, 2004 This is my eigth song (I'm not posting in order). It's a short progressive rock song, guitar is powerful in this but the bass is more of the lead instrument. I would really appreciate some comments. Beach of Memories (Written August 15, 2004 by Mike R. Smale) Tales of long ago, are reflected in the sand. The seeds that the present sow, echo throughout this land. Images of days gone by, come to life along the shore. Showing every truth and lie, and days of peace and war. The Beach of Memories, everyday we live is here. The Beach of Memories, every laugh and every tear. The lightest hours, the darkest sins. What's exposed here shall happen again. The Beach of Memories, every laugh and every tear. The Beach of Memories, of every hour, of every year, everyday we live is here. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Danielj 1 Report post Posted August 28, 2004 You are great. That was very Original. something lacking a bit these days Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aunt_Acid 1 Report post Posted August 30, 2004 I would love to hear that with music. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_Annabelle_ 0 Report post Posted August 30, 2004 I thought it was excellent, very well written and wonderfully poetic. Great job! . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
boingobaby 0 Report post Posted August 30, 2004 Very nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
