daslied

I think my current favorite word is "shart".

That works as well.

Remember, it's d-a-s-l-i-e-d.

The first little bit sounds like the opening of "Sgt. Pepper's Reprise".

Well, the obvious would be suicide, but it could also easily be just a departure from the situation.

I think the Colts are the home team?

The first verse reminds me of Shel Silverstein, which is good (to me). The second is great, too. Sounds like a good bonus/hidden track on an album.

Overlooked Defending Champs > Team With Inevitable Stumble

Colts. Marvin Harrison will be back, as will Peyton's regular (left?) tackle. I pray to god that the Colts run the score up.

So a three-martini lunch is conducive to good writing.

I like the whole thing. I think the last stanza is the most well-written, and I like that the middle bit is the only one that seems to have some closure - "the inevitable happened" - as opposed to the more open-ended first and last stanzas. It's definitely a bit of a downer (which is fine by me), but it doesn't feel like a typical "oh, woe is me" poem/lyric. The writing and construction are more advanced.

I posted something here a long time ago with the same thing - the line I hated the most seemed to be the favorite of people who read it. I like it because it doesn't necessarily fit with the other couplets, but it's effective in placement.

Love, love that line.

Hog's A** Meat

"Cave Enters Hall: Bad Seeds Left Behind" Possibly offensive.

I knew that when I put it in.

I tried to watch it a second time, and my neighbor exploded.

I found it incredibly unsettling the first time, because you did nothing but wait for something. Anticipation is the key to a good horrow movie, and that's what this one had by the truckload. To me, though, it's pretty much unwatchable after that first time.

Greatest movie ever. Ever. Ever.

I say "she who smelt it dealt it".

You should have another one.

Ain't no somewhat about it.

Uh, no.

Didn't you say somewhat of the same thing earlier? I'm not talking about putting them on an album that I may profit from; I'm more talking about putting them in a commercial selling diapers.

In that particular case, B-F, any commercial use would mean nothing but great exposure. And after all, isn't that what most bands are after - an audience?