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Beautifully written...I really liked this poem alot!
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Mairi, I'm almost speechless..I simply love this song! I want to keep reading it over and over. You definitely have something great here.
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Great structure..I really like this!!
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Solitude -n- Guilt beyond rescue point like a burning tree surrounded by ashen forest or of what was once falling ashes- like snowflakes on this roof, our minds thoughts so heavy- sinking into scattered guilt i could pick any out and write for days but will not tranfixed on nothing- my roof grows layered in ash thoughts so heavy then nothing full moon lit nights-eyes wide open- i take it all in searching for what was lost in the shadows, it smells so familiar but not a single memory- of where i've stood too many times to forget and yet, there's nothing Scott-Free
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This poem is similar to how i'd express my feelings on hope.I thought it eas great!! :rockon:Scott-Free
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Raw emotions,written with a honest heart! I loved it. I hope it was theraputic for you, or at least helped you vent. :rockon:Scott-Free
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Beautifully written, nice work!!
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Beautifully written, Keep on writing, you're very talented!!
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Good eye for detail! I hope you at least read my poem :rockon:Scott-Free
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tears roll down my face it's been so many years... i'm sorry dad, but this life is just hurting too bad all those years stoned face and cold... that's how a man does his time to get through his bit i'm finally out,i never cried would you be mad now that i shed a tear at your funeral i'm sorry dad,but i can't act stoned face and cold anymore i'll bring my own son to visit your grave someday he'll know it's okay for a man to cry it's okay to tell your son i love you i guess i'll just be doing it differant than you rest in peace i love you [This is a work in progress poem. Feedback much appreciated] Scott-Free
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Mairi,This is very well structured and illustrates the emotion very well. I can relate to the poem and that feeling...I love it!! Can't wait to read more!! :rockon:Scott-Free
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When you see me laying beside myself- Don't lay beside me but take me up in your arms without any loss Could you just hold me- I need a warmer souls touch Don't drift away-it's too easy when you see me laying beside myself- Don't lay beside me 'cause you know I'm dying inside The only reminder I'm alive- Is the pain of needing more I awake everyday, but can't find my way out My heads barely above water, and I feel just fine- or I don't feel at all Yeah, but I'm really just fine If you could just hold me I need a warmer souls touch Don't drift away-It's too easy, much too easy I can't promise to ever change I can only be the person you love to hate You've grown to distaste me So take me, misplace me, or replace me- I've grown preoccupied with me We've all been through hard times at one point or another...I beleive we are stronger when we make it out the other side.This poem reflects a personal struggle I've gone through and demons I overcame. Comments would be much appreciated THANKS Scott-Free
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Mairi, I too didn't know you wrote poetry. This is a great poem. I felt every word and expression. Can't wait to read more of your work! Scott-Free
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Thank's alot, that's been on my mind for some time, and I heard the song again last night, but couldn't remember the artist.Thank you!
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Looking for the artist and song title. A line from the song I remember is:"It seems to me that maybe, pretty much always means no."