jute86 Posted March 14, 2005 Report Posted March 14, 2005 I can't really give much of a description for this one...just looking for any input you can give... If Only They Knew Traffic down on Broadway A little girl without a cause A faithless effort to cross some roads A desperate hope to erase what she saw Two rage-filled parents And a frame on the wall Some shattered glass And a 911 call [CHORUS] And she walks on to nowhere To a town without a name To a place where she?s wanted And where nothing?s the same To a day without mommy And a night without dad To a life without screaming To much more than she?s had For a day with no black And a night with no blue Sometimes there?s no telling What this little girl might do Oh, if they only knew A little sidewalk wanderer A darkened city street Past blankets over boxes By a faded old car seat She cries herself to sleep An unknown orphan all alone She spends a black night weeping With nowhere to call home [CHORUS] And she walks on to nowhere To a town without a name To a place where she?s wanted And where nothing?s the same To a day without mommy And a night without dad To a life without screaming To much more than she?s had For a day with no black And a night with no blue Sometimes there?s no telling What this little girl might do Oh, if they only knew She just wants a hand To hold when she cries She just wants a voice To sing her good night And for a minute or two Who knows what she?d do Oh, if only they knew :: Laura
windy1 Posted March 14, 2005 Report Posted March 14, 2005 Oh jute this is really good. As a song I could really see it country, with a couple changes. This is excellent. Heck leave it alone. This is a good song just as it is!
Jenny Posted March 14, 2005 Report Posted March 14, 2005 It's beautiful, Laura. That's all I can say.
TrampledUnderFoot Posted March 16, 2005 Report Posted March 16, 2005 I really enjoyed that...and windy is right...I can hear this as a country song.
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