pete38890 Posted February 28, 2005 Report Posted February 28, 2005 the birds had their way with you. now the sea takes you home....
Addictedtoclassic Posted March 1, 2005 Report Posted March 1, 2005 Is that it? Maybe you should use that to create an actual writing piece rather than just a philosophical saying.
Foxy Posted March 1, 2005 Report Posted March 1, 2005 I'm saying the same as Aaron, is that it? From what I've read you write really good thought provoking stuff, do it with this
TrampledUnderFoot Posted March 2, 2005 Report Posted March 2, 2005 Those 2 sentences (or whatever they are) could be made into something really good. Add more to that!
Aunt_Acid Posted March 2, 2005 Report Posted March 2, 2005 I think it's perfect the way it is. Adding anything to it would take away from its beauty. I picture it as an instrumental, and that line somewhere in the middle.
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