Danielj Posted January 1, 2005 Report Share Posted January 1, 2005 Breeze Of Her Life I feel a breeze, Coming through the air, I feel a breeze, Of anguish and despair This breeze is unnerving, Peerlessly burning, In the mind of an unknown friend, Don't make this the end... Once In a while, This breeze transforms Into a blustery smile, Worth the weight of the world More often than not, These smiles decay, Into a hurricane of uncertainties That never go away The breeze follows me with secrets, Haunts me with problems, I wish I could see her, To make things better.... But after all, You can only feel the wind......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mairi Posted January 1, 2005 Report Share Posted January 1, 2005 Breeze Of Her Life This breeze is unnerving, Peerlessly burning, In the mind of an unknown friend, Don't make this the end... Once In a while, This breeze transforms Into a blustery smile, Worth the weight of the world i loved it, daniel. especially the above stanzas. eeeeee, you are very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted January 1, 2005 Report Share Posted January 1, 2005 Jeepers Creepers Dan! That was doggonnit good!!! :: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danielj Posted January 1, 2005 Author Report Share Posted January 1, 2005 Thank You and Thank You Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted January 4, 2005 Report Share Posted January 4, 2005 Woah there Dan..That's amazing, wow I'm so depressed now..kudos to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scott-Free Posted January 4, 2005 Report Share Posted January 4, 2005 Beautifully written, nice work!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kellie rockin in the free world Posted January 17, 2005 Report Share Posted January 17, 2005 wow that is really good....normally girls are the ones who come up with great poems but WOW that is awsome...CONGRATS :happybanana: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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