Danielj Posted January 1, 2005 Report Posted January 1, 2005 Breeze Of Her Life I feel a breeze, Coming through the air, I feel a breeze, Of anguish and despair This breeze is unnerving, Peerlessly burning, In the mind of an unknown friend, Don't make this the end... Once In a while, This breeze transforms Into a blustery smile, Worth the weight of the world More often than not, These smiles decay, Into a hurricane of uncertainties That never go away The breeze follows me with secrets, Haunts me with problems, I wish I could see her, To make things better.... But after all, You can only feel the wind.........
Mairi Posted January 1, 2005 Report Posted January 1, 2005 Breeze Of Her Life This breeze is unnerving, Peerlessly burning, In the mind of an unknown friend, Don't make this the end... Once In a while, This breeze transforms Into a blustery smile, Worth the weight of the world i loved it, daniel. especially the above stanzas. eeeeee, you are very good.
Earth-Angel Posted January 1, 2005 Report Posted January 1, 2005 Jeepers Creepers Dan! That was doggonnit good!!! ::
Jillianne Posted January 4, 2005 Report Posted January 4, 2005 Woah there Dan..That's amazing, wow I'm so depressed now..kudos to you
kellie rockin in the free world Posted January 17, 2005 Report Posted January 17, 2005 wow that is really good....normally girls are the ones who come up with great poems but WOW that is awsome...CONGRATS :happybanana:
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