CaptainMikeRS Posted December 7, 2004 Report Share Posted December 7, 2004 This is my fourteenth song, written for Jenny. This one has chamber pop melody. "Flood of Rose Petals" (Written December 7, 2004 by Mike R. Smale © 2004) Fragrances fill the air, rose petals flutter on the breeze. Brushing by your silky hair, and swirling past your knees. Obscuring such a wintry day, putting on this alluring display. Holding you as the wind blows, and the petals fall like the snow. As this mystic shower falls and wisps on through. I just want you to know that I love you. A sea of white and red, covers all of the ground. And decorates your head with a flower-patterned crown. As this mystic shower falls and wisps on through. I just want you to know that I'll always love you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted December 10, 2004 Report Share Posted December 10, 2004 Such a lovely thought Mike. Jenny is a lucky lady that she has a man who thinks so much of her, enough to write 14 beautiful songs for her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nicolina-Maria29648 Posted December 12, 2004 Report Share Posted December 12, 2004 YAY! Beautiful as always! But if I may ask a VERY stupid question (and you all must know that I completely understand how pedestrian this query is...) what IS chamber pop? I'm trying to get the full effect of the song in my head and it's just not getting there...haha...well, I've been embarrassed enough for one day...Bravo on your great work! Nikki :: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sweetie62 Posted December 12, 2004 Report Share Posted December 12, 2004 wow!! great song! you are truly a great writer.. keep it up :: -Em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaptainMikeRS Posted December 12, 2004 Author Report Share Posted December 12, 2004 YAY! Beautiful as always! But if I may ask a VERY stupid question (and you all must know that I completely understand how pedestrian this query is...) what IS chamber pop? I'm trying to get the full effect of the song in my head and it's just not getting there...haha...well, I've been embarrassed enough for one day...Bravo on your great work! Nikki :: This link explains exactly what champer pop (a form of alternative rock) is a lot better than I can. Link to chamber pop definition The Divine Comedy is an example of a very popular Irish chamber pop band. Although it's mostly in the UK it found it's way into my style when I first heard them. Thanks for all the good feedback too, if you go to my profile here there's a link to another site under homepage were I have not just my songs but also many of my poems as well, too many to post here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaeem Posted December 13, 2004 Report Share Posted December 13, 2004 Hello mike, All is very pleasent and splendid.Love is like an artist it effaces and educes you.Now jenny's love have effaced and educed ur feelings.well done keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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