Andzy Posted December 4, 2004 Report Share Posted December 4, 2004 Imperfect World I?m scared Scared in an imperfect world Where everyone?s trying to be perfect Scared to be myself; And scared not to be myself We?re all mixed up; That?s the way it is It?s what keeps our insanity sane By trying to be perfect in an imperfect world You are failing yourself Losing your identity, your imperfections; Your beauty Love you so you can love me It?s all so simple it?s hard Brilliant people understand others Only genius?s understand themselves So whisk me away; Take me from this imperfect world And into a world that exists for only us A world where I will see you Witness your light A perfect love between imperfect souls Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted December 4, 2004 Report Share Posted December 4, 2004 I like it. It's not long-winded in description or feeling. It says what it needs to and you walk away smiling. "Where everyone?s trying to be perfect Scared to be myself; And scared not to be myself" "A perfect love between imperfect souls" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko90 Posted December 4, 2004 Report Share Posted December 4, 2004 Truer Words...never spoken my young grasshopper!!! that was good, really good...Keep it up, and enjoy your stay here at Song Facts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted December 4, 2004 Report Share Posted December 4, 2004 So whisk me away; Take me from this imperfect world And into a world that exists for only us A world where I will see you Witness your light A perfect love between imperfect souls My favorite part..well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faithless Wanderer Posted December 6, 2004 Report Share Posted December 6, 2004 Well, since I'm new here, and being the creative loving girl that I am, I figured this was as good of place to start out as any. What you wrote was amazing!! It's creative and it's not something that everyone everywhere writes. It had some sense on idividuality to it. Writing is one of the most beautiful things in this world if it's done properly, and that was done properly!! Hahah I sound like a teacher.. Oh well whatever. Either way, I liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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