Flibble12345 Posted November 10, 2004 Report Share Posted November 10, 2004 Hello everyone, I've never posted on anything like this before, but after seeing how *someone* was so addicted i thought i'd give it a try. I got home in a mood today... long story... and wrote this. Let me know what you think... Why do i do it to myself? I open up, I give and give, But rejection is all I get. Perhaps I love too easily, maybe I care too much, Is it me or really something else? When I love someone, They are the center of my world. I let myself in to recieve all this pain, Heartbreak and loneliness seem to be my curse. So I sit and I ponder. Alone with my tears. Alone alone alone. Hmmm, not that great really... oh well Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted November 10, 2004 Report Share Posted November 10, 2004 Chojin, your heart is such a loving and giving one - one day that heart will find its perfect mate and she will love you with all the intensity you seek. You'll be embraced by all her love, more than you have even dreamed of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel2Velvet Posted November 10, 2004 Report Share Posted November 10, 2004 Geoff, writing your feelings helps on so many levels. You are smart to transfer your emotions to paper as soon as possible. I also write. Here are two observations I have made over half of a hopefully very long lifetime that might be of some consolation to you at this time. The first is untitled, while the other is appropriately titled. Passion that results in pain Is infinitely better than Solitude that realizes solace. One indicates a flame That will never die. The other gathers kindling That will never light. Learned We fell in love with ideas of love; Living life, our hearts were torn apart. We should have sought integrity .. character, Let hearts find the love therein. Youthful fantasy and reality is a volatile mixture. Decisions should never be made near a wishing well. All the best to you, my friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mairi Posted November 10, 2004 Report Share Posted November 10, 2004 that was....wow, really summed up how i kinda feel right now, thank you so much for that :rockon:you rock, dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted November 10, 2004 Report Share Posted November 10, 2004 Yeah - YOU ROCK DUDE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flibble12345 Posted November 10, 2004 Author Report Share Posted November 10, 2004 Thanks guys... almost embarressed now :S Ah well. I may well post more in the future. It feels nice to know that people read what i write. Thank you. x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted November 10, 2004 Report Share Posted November 10, 2004 Never be embarressed about your work - these guys will tell you, it's all appreciated round this neck of the woods! Stick around a while, you just might like it here. :: Oh, and welcome to songfacts! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danielj Posted November 11, 2004 Report Share Posted November 11, 2004 Exactly what I was thinking Sue. That is some of the best and most thought out stuff I've read in a while on here. And there has been some good stuff on the boards lately. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko90 Posted November 11, 2004 Report Share Posted November 11, 2004 That was very well done dude!! cudos, as well, Welcome to the willing version of HOTEL CALIFORNIA!!! Once you come, you dont want to leave!!! go me!! go you!! go all the writters here, I feel that the writers have gotten stronger since my arrival that long month a go!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XXX Posted November 11, 2004 Report Share Posted November 11, 2004 Whoa. Another games tester...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flibble12345 Posted November 11, 2004 Author Report Share Posted November 11, 2004 Hey guys, more and more I am looking forward to being here more often And yes, another games tester... I work with Sue. So you can blame her for me being here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted November 11, 2004 Report Share Posted November 11, 2004 Well done chojin!!! really good!!! Encore, encore!! :: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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