Steel2Velvet Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 First Kiss She is not considered his girlfriend But both feel Change's first blooms Not knowing how nor not even why He kisses her as he has kissed family Rocket recoil of some part of his face Her lips yet linger forward, eyes shut His repress soft ..sweet, sublime, moist Her taste refreshes his imagination like An old laughing sea pays dawn's dowry Through vestigial instinct their minds Rejoice in what that virgin kiss means One moment more unfamiliar heat rises Ancient warmth of forgone acceptance From two souls trembling at their rub This first girl (the only one) with whom He feels comfort sharing daylight dreams This exquisitely distracting reflection Looks so very good sharing his blush Love's dancing somewhere between them To a new beat built by searching hearts Too young to make believe there’re rules ....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 The last verse is my favorite, very nice Ron! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Laurie_ Posted September 23, 2011 Report Share Posted September 23, 2011 Sweet! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
night2day Posted October 20, 2011 Report Share Posted October 20, 2011 i still really have not a true first kiss but i like your poem steel2velvet! ty for the nice poem! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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