Steel2Velvet Posted July 9, 2011 Report Share Posted July 9, 2011 Somerset County Thoughts draw down upon you like dew caresses ryegrass fields No part of you remains without a droplet from a daydream My imagination settles over you softly, sparkling, clearing I see your face before me as I turn the corners of my life Your apparition met by mild surprise, "Oh .. how lovely." This is all I need to sense sunshine prising layered clouds To eagerly burrow into your shelter should drizzle succeed To smell fresh breezes when trapped within cloistered longing Everyday, like each night, you are mine. ------ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted July 12, 2011 Report Share Posted July 12, 2011 Very romantic and pretty, Ron Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucky Posted July 13, 2011 Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 I love the images and feelings this pulls up for me. I've missed reading your work here. Thank you Ron, it's lovely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel2Velvet Posted July 13, 2011 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2011 Thanks, Jenny and Lucky. I had a deal a couple years back that precluded me posting any of my original poetry online, except for one particular site that was supposed to be a paying location. That deal has fallen through, so I will be posting here again, as I produce new material. Perhaps some prose too. You guys have always been supportive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucky Posted July 15, 2011 Report Share Posted July 15, 2011 Their loss is our gain. I know we all look forward to more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shawna Posted July 16, 2011 Report Share Posted July 16, 2011 "Thoughts draw down upon you like dew" and I'm yours completely. That is one of the best opening lines I've ever read. So visual and sensual all at the same time. Love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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