Sweet Jane 61 Posted June 9, 2007 Report Share Posted June 9, 2007 This is how I see love, it can be the biggest high of your life and sometimes the biggest hurt you will experience. Love There is no forever in love... it's a chance your heart takes. Taking your breath away in an instant, wonderful new feelings it creates. It captures your soul... and wraps you in its sweet embrace. Fulfilling your every need, giving in freely without haste. Breaking your heart in a moment... it can bring you to your knees. The pain an unbearable ache, reminding you; love has no guarantees. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayzor Posted June 10, 2007 Report Share Posted June 10, 2007 So very true, Jane! Wonderful! I felt the feeling of soaring above the clouds and then the crash landing that you describe and that I'm sure everyone has felt at one time or another. Excellent stuff! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted June 10, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 10, 2007 It kicks you in the gut sometimes, doesn't it? And usually when you are on that high. Thanks Ray, I was hoping most could relate. PS...do you want to be my agent?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayzor Posted June 10, 2007 Report Share Posted June 10, 2007 Sure! But I'm a greedy bugger, so I'll demand 90% ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Floydaholic Posted June 10, 2007 Report Share Posted June 10, 2007 This is a very good poem, I like it alot. I can definately relate to this poem, with the sting of heartbreak that I have experienced, and also the wonderful highs that you can feel. Well done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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