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Does a hurricane look behind

at the desperation there?

Do waves feel regret as they

roll out to sea?

The rain patters down

It always rains now

Do you really see me?

I'm a life warrior.

We walk as we talk

We sounds so good to me

I is all you know

Me is all you live

Does a hurricane look behind

at the desperation there?

Do waves feel regret as they

roll out to sea?

The rain patters down

I laugh and i smile

Did you really see me?

One more life to go the mile

Butterflies on your lips

Rivers in your laugh

Walls behind your eyes

Stopping love getting in

Does a hurricane look behind

at the desperation there?

Do waves feel regret as they

roll out to sea?

I pause to look at your soft eyes

like a frog in the touchlight I'm hypnotised

Hold me, touch me, kiss me, love me

My armors stripped away.

Your arms used to hold me safe

wrapped tight around my back

I'm trapped caught in the cage

the softest cage i know

Does a hurricane look behind

at the desperation there?

Do waves feel regret as they

roll out to sea?

My eyes hold yours shining in wonder

My lips whisper your name

as your fingers touch

My hearts a skippy love song record

One you threw away.

Your soft lips moist and parted

as the form the letters of my name

I sigh this is it, this is heaven

you gotta know heaven before you know hell

Your arms brake away

As my knees start to tremble

My lungs burn and my heart screams

As you walk away.

Does a hurricane look behind

at the desperation there?

Do waves feel regret as they

roll out to sea?

The colors fade and the sound goes dull

talk to me, smaile and it's back

my heart still weeps everytime

Everytime you walk away

Hold me safe in harbour once more

Don't let me drown in life alone

Stow me saftly in your arms

Away from hurt and harm

Does a hurricane look behind

at the desperation there?

Do waves feel regret as they

roll out to sea?

I remember us, we, when

As I blankly stare at the table top

The bottle's lables a blur

and the Voldkas watered by my tears

Silent regrets and protests

a warriors scream muffled by life

Slient pain and exhustion

rolls down and splashes on the taped up photo

Does a hurricane look behind

at the desperation there?

Do waves feel regret as they

roll out to sea?

Cold against my head

cold comfort that it's over

Lifes the only thing thats painless when it ends

Cold barrel, cold bullet, cold heart

My tounge flickers out to moisten my lips

Like yours did that first night together

Ah yes, Remember together?

You cold, stand-alone rock face?

Does a hurricane look behind

at the desperation there?

Do waves feel regret as they

roll out to sea?

but don't you know rocks crumble?

there power and might crashes down

your safe for now, ah yes

but soon my friend soon

Crimson meets clear as the ribbons of blood

flow to embrace the rain on the sidewalk

It always rains now

theres a smile on my cold lips as you walk

with her through crimson rain

Does a hurricane look behind

at the desperation there?

Do waves feel regret as they

roll out to sea?

(corus fades out)

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I didn't like it . Lot's of good poetic ideas completely mixed up that build to nothing mixed in with mundane , ordinary speach and ideas or thoughts . A revision would help . It has potential , but is just cluttered presently with a chaosim of thought .

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