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Mairi

Untitled as yet(Possible title "Painful")

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ok, my writing ha become vey childish and rubbish but this song is probably the most emotionally charged of mine and i've put a lot of effort into it. so go in, insult and criticise all you want. the parts in brackets are sung by a backing singer.

Untitled as yet (Possible title"Painful")

To hold your hand

to be close, so near to you

to be just yours

there's nothing that i wouldn't do

And i'd change everything about myself

if it made things alright

So i wouldn't cry, not at all

during those lonely nights

Chorus

The tears that form in my eyes

can only be caused by you

And you could so easily stop them

If you wanted to

but you just don't need me

(Oh jesus christ)

but you just don't need me

(but you are my vice)

For you to call me yours

to be wanted, needed by you

To be your other half

There's nothing that i wouldn't do

And I'd kill myself for you

If you'd just talk to me

I wouldn't wince at all

while I'd slowly bleed

Chorus

you show all the weakness in me

you show all the weakness in me

you show all the weakness in me

*backing singer sings in harmony* (please don't do this to me)

you show all the weakness in me

(please don't do this to me)

you show all the weakness in me

(please don't do this to me)

you show all the weakness in me

(please don't do this to me)

YOU SHOW ALL THE WEAKNESS IN ME

chorus

*whispered* you show all the weakness in me

because you are my vice

Ok, comments please.

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Why don't you call it painfull love?. Try these guitar chords with it, ok?. Not necessarily in order, I just think they would go well with it. Dm, Am, Cmaj7, Bm7, Em, Gm. Tell me what you think ok?.

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