Scott-Free Posted December 30, 2004 Report Posted December 30, 2004 When you see me laying beside myself- Don't lay beside me but take me up in your arms without any loss Could you just hold me- I need a warmer souls touch Don't drift away-it's too easy when you see me laying beside myself- Don't lay beside me 'cause you know I'm dying inside The only reminder I'm alive- Is the pain of needing more I awake everyday, but can't find my way out My heads barely above water, and I feel just fine- or I don't feel at all Yeah, but I'm really just fine If you could just hold me I need a warmer souls touch Don't drift away-It's too easy, much too easy I can't promise to ever change I can only be the person you love to hate You've grown to distaste me So take me, misplace me, or replace me- I've grown preoccupied with me We've all been through hard times at one point or another...I beleive we are stronger when we make it out the other side.This poem reflects a personal struggle I've gone through and demons I overcame. Comments would be much appreciated THANKS Scott-Free
Mairi Posted December 31, 2004 Report Posted December 31, 2004 Jiminy cricket! yet again you astound me Scott. woo hoo! :rockon:amazing!
Jenny Posted January 4, 2005 Report Posted January 4, 2005 Could you just hold me- I need a warmer souls touch I like these two lines the best, good work, Scott
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