Nicolina-Maria29648 Posted November 23, 2004 Report Share Posted November 23, 2004 I wrote this as a piece for my poetry class and I ended up absolutely loving it. Feedback is greatly appreciated. Say goodbye to a world you never had. Shattered fragments fade into the vastness Of your eyes. The night no longer holds sad Connotations, only the stained plastic Of lies. Find no more peace in seclusion, Empty sheets of canvas wither and turn Black against the jaundice light. Delusions Of nightmares sweep anguish anew and spurn All hope of beauty in a graying space. And yet, still you wish you might once go back; Back to a world and a time and a place You reached, if only in dreams. Do not pack Away your passions on a broken shelf. In the grips of loss will you find yourself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaptainMikeRS Posted November 23, 2004 Report Share Posted November 23, 2004 This is a very powerful and well done sonnet. Everything flows nicely, with each word weaving into the next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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