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This drug called cupid

Is as good as it seems

They say it gives you the high of your dreams

This thing they call cupid

Makes you feel real good

Just the way every person should

I?d like to try the cupid, but I don?t need it

Still, I?m just curious, not greedy

But then the gasoline spills and it doesn?t fool the devil

He buries your thoughts and your music with a shovel

Hurry you can still get to the wedding on time

So you can walk outside with deep thoughts on your mind

Alone at sunset in the Ludington park.

If you just stay strong you can pass the mark

The cupid?s waiting tonight in your friend?s hand

You can make it yours and walk away from the band

But this drug called Cupid is a hard thing to do

Because it?s in another dimension and another time too

But you remember to the time that the gasoline spilled

And before you catch fire

You start the motor on your heart, close your eyes and try

To get back to where you were before

You were so close yet farther than you ever could?ve been

Now it?s up to you to tell how the story ends

But this drug called Cupid is a hard thing to do

Because it?s in another dimension and another time too

To tell you more about the drug, it comes in a package deal

Nothing extra, it?s all there, nothing fifth wheel

It makes you feel? well I don?t know

But if I find out, I?ll let you know

Oooooh

Ohhhhhh

Now if you feel like you have the answers.

And everyone around you is stupid

No need to fret, just go to bed

And sneak a little cupid.

But this drug called Cupid is a hard thing to do

Because it?s in another dimension and another time too

It?s in another dimension and another time too

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I like it very much :thumbsup: Your phrasing is good, and the way you tell the story with a fresh breath at the start of every verse rocks! You don't get bored reading it, even though it is quite long.

"But this drug called Cupid is a hard thing to do

Because it?s in another dimension and another time too"

:guitar:

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