xoit 0 Report post Posted September 22, 2004 Here's a couple of short poems I wrote.. A Beautiful: Your Body is all beauty violets teem, sunshine covers onto where roses lay on warm soft beds And flickers swim high in the open blue. What a good day it is thus my feelings afloat from here to you. You the Actor: A day is endless not in time, but life. it walks, it runs from here to their It'll fly and even hide, clear as air They come and go so fix your act Always give a perfect show. Pure, Pure, Pure: What the! I saw heaven it was pure in all of white yet no eyes saw means was I dreaming? no it was just T.V. But could this be reall? I guess so 'cus I believe in He!. The next one is my 1st poem I wrote 4 years ago, I'm just basically metaphoring a commander to a sterotypist. Commander: Hey, commander what's your command? owning amenities is a rule sir, that is hard to follow I'm dazed and I refuse So I'll be me Probally, your enemy And now I feel relieved Barely. Curious I'am shall I be like you? well-known in perfect cool. Hand me those expensive shoes amend them to your crews. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wyld Card 5 Report post Posted September 22, 2004 I would love to be at the place you described in "A Beautiful", sounds very peaceful & Blue. I often times aspire to a perfect fantasy region, where I can let all my troubles dissolve into the ocean and lie down & stare at the beautiful sky, while soothing music plays in the mileu & birds fly above me. Very nice writing incidentally. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
scoobydoobie 0 Report post Posted September 22, 2004 Here is my favorite poem of all time. There once was a man from Lieghiton Who said mam' you sure have a tight one She said oh bless your soul But your in the wrong hole There's plenty of room in the right one Benny Hill, Gotta love that background disco music from the Thames...BBC lives Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
