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marko90

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  1. I agree Limp Bizkit aren't all that great...not what they were before, and it is apparent that Wes Borland (the Bassist) was everything in that band and when he left, Limp Bizkit SUCKED MANURE!!!
  2. :: HOLY MOLY THAT WAS AMAZING!! I ABSOLELUTY LOVED THAT! I wish I could write like that, I could relate to EVERY WORD WRITTEN!!! I loved it keep it up hombre!! MARKO
  3. That was very good! I can see that one to go along the lines of a Good Charlotte style of song...I enjoyed it!!
  4. I'd Say my 3 MAIN influences would be... 1- Seether 2- Three Days Grace 3- Evanescence though its basically any group with lyrical substance.
  5. I have quite a few lyrical influences... Linkin Park, Good Charlotte, Evanescence, 3 Days Grace, Papa Roach, Simple Plan, Seether, 3 Doors Down, Our Lady Peace, Disturbed, Velvet Revolver (to an extent), the Tea Party, Hoobastank...and counting...its basically pends on my mood that particular day, if I'm sad i write songs like "BROKEN HOME", if I'm mad I write songs like "GET THE F*** OUT", if I'm lost or confused I write songs like "THE LONELY ROAD" I used to write love songs, but recently got out of that, dispite the fact I have a Girlfreind which I've been going out with for almost a year, she has been wondering why I've been writting like thats, and I have no answer, its just what flows, its what some people somwhere have to deal with, and if my lyrics help them thru a situation...AWESOME! Anyways hombres Peace out Marko
  6. Thank you man...some dont think so...but I do what I do, if they dont like me, bite me! thats what I say to them, but I do appreciate that man, I enjoy critcism whether good or bad, I feel it helps me get better, and i've been writing for about a year anyways, peace out hombres Marko
  7. LOL! you, we get that, infact Football is tied for my favorite sport with Hockey (typical canadian stereotype there)
  8. THE LONELY ROAD As I walk down this road All I can feel is this weight grow I walk and walk, but I go nowhere When I see my destination I stumble before getting there People pass me by, They don?t even know I?m alive I only wish I could reach my destination. Now, road blocks are up on the lines It seems I?ve fallen into more lies As I follow this unfamiliar detour I cannot see I don?t know if this is where I want to be Finally, your light shines my way No I may see as if it were day I reach out to you, but my hand hits wall As this floor drops out, I fall Then the light fades, and everything becomes?black I long for you to come back to me As I cry I fall to my knees This journey inst worth following without your light As I kneel crying, face in my hands Your light comes back to me again I reach out to you, the wall falls? I now realize that my destination was never anywhere It wasn?t here nor there, it was right here! GET THE F*** AWAY! When I first met you, you were prefect I was filled with happiness Now as we grow together All I feel is like a sack of [bleep] What they say is true? Love is blind When I first met you, were inseparable Now when your around I want you to? GET THE [bleep] AWAY!! You don?t know the pain you?ve caused me, I was a sure handed quarterback Now it is self-esteem I lack So now all I want is for you to? GET THE [bleep] AWAY!! You?d say ?I love you? Then promptly turn around and say the same thing to my best friend You two never thought I?d ever know?BUT I DO! So the only thing I have to say to you both is? GET THE [bleep] AWAY!! Your deceit is too much for me to handle Your lies have become unforgivable! Our live is DEAD! So just please? GET THE [bleep] AWAY!! I was the victim caught in the undertow I was the victim of Robbery I was the victim of a Tornado I say to you now? GET THE [bleep] AWAY!! You lied to me (GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!) You deceived me (GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!) You cheated me (GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!) You stole my love (GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!) You tossed me aside (GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!) You used me (GET THE [bleep] AWAY!!) You call me?I don?t answer? You say we need to talk? I say we don?t have anything to talk about? Though before you leave I want you to hear this? You lied, you cheated, you deceived me, and for that? I [bleep] HATE YOU?WONT YOU PLEASE GET THE [bleep] OUT!! BROKEN HOME [VERSE 1] Is success a mere elusion? Or is it just with me? Every attempt I?ve made at success and make you proud? It fails? That ?A??(Should have been an A plus) That game with 6 tackles?(should have been 10!) The girl of my dreams?(should have been prettier) {CHORUS} Every time I try to be better? It isn?t?IT NEVER IS!! IT NEVER WILL BE!! If all my attempts fail?why try? So dad to you I say? I?m sorry I?m not perfect I?m sorry I?m not to your liking I?m sorry?but?I am leaving?I can?t live like this anymore!! [VERSE 2] The first place at the science fair?(should have been better) The second place in the marathon?(should have been FIRST!) I?ve tried, and tried but I cannot win in this endless game! I hate you?(but I don?t)? I love you?(but I don?t)? I want to stay?(but I don?t)? I want to leave?(but I don?t)? {CHORUS} Every time I try to be better? It isn?t?IT NEVER IS!! IT NEVER WILL BE!! If all my attempts fail?why try? So dad to you I say? I?m sorry I?m not perfect I?m sorry I?m not to your liking I?m sorry?but?I am leaving? I can?t live like this anymore!! [VERSE 3] I never thought I?d see the day that I wanted away? But since moms left you haven?t been the same! I want to run away?(but I don?t)? I want to stay?(but I don?t)? I wish my thoughts would be come straight and I knew what to do! I wish mom was still around but she?s not because you drove her away! You and your drinking! You and your yelling?you and your Cheating! LOOK WHAT YOU?VE DONE TO THIS FAMILY! YOU WILL NEVER KNOW THE HARDSHIP WE?VE BEEN THOUGH! THE FINNANCIAL BURDEN YOU?VE CAUSED!! Why do you have to be so difficult! You call me the disgrace! {CHORUS} Every time I try to be better? It isn?t?IT NEVER IS!! IT NEVER WILL BE!! If all my attempts fail?why try? So dad to you I say? I?m sorry I?m not perfect I?m sorry I?m not to your liking I?m sorry?but?I am leaving? I can?t live like this anymore!! [VERSE 4] you have run my name through the mud! You have destroyed my confidence? You have ended all things good for me! You have gone and messed me up! And yet you still don?t care! Go ahead dad?have another one! All you care about is Jack Daniels! {CHORUS} Every time I try to be better? It isn?t?IT NEVER IS!! IT NEVER WILL BE!! If all my attempts fail?why try? So dad to you I say? I?m sorry I?m not perfect I?m sorry I?m not to your liking I?m sorry?but?I am leaving? I can?t live like this anymore!! [VERSE 5] Now, I stand here looking down at you? I knew this day was going to come? I knew cancer was going to play a role in this! I hated you?(but I don?t)? I loved you?(but I don?t)? I want you around?(but I don?t)? I want you to be here today?(but I don?t)? I can?t take this anymore! All my conflicts within? They have taken its toll on me!! {CHORUS} Every time I try to be better? It isn?t?IT NEVER IS!! IT NEVER WILL BE!! If all my attempts fail?why try? So dad to you I say? I?m sorry I?m not perfect I?m sorry I?m not to your liking I?m sorry?but?I am leaving? I can?t live like this anymore!! [VERSE 6] I know you wanted the best for me? I know you wanted me to be good? I know you wanted me to succeed? But I needed to succeed my way? I need to be the best I wanted to be? I wanted to be good at my own things? I wanted to decided my OWN life? I didn?t want it predetermined by you! {CHORUS} Every time I try to be better? It isn?t?IT NEVER IS!! IT NEVER WILL BE!! If all my attempts fail?why try? So dad to you I say? I?m sorry I?m not perfect I?m sorry I?m not to your liking I?m sorry?but?I am leaving? I can?t live like this anymore!! THE END There was a time we were so Tight Now our time is spent to fight Is this what we?ve come to? What else can we do? [Chorus] I guess this is the end I?m no longer considered your friend All this time I was used I was oblivious to the news YOUR no longer MY friend {Verse 2} You never had my back I now see the friendship you lack I fell into you little game Now I feel that your lame You messed me all for a dame [Chorus] I guess this is the end I?m no longer considered your friend All this time I was used I was oblivious to the news YOUR no longer MY friend {Spoken Bridge} I should have seen it coming! Am I really THAT blind? I don?t believe this! One day friends? Next day Enemies! How did this happen? Now I sit here alone? Thinking? {Verse 3} I think of the times you led me astray You?d lie without a delay I think of the times you played me I can?t believe my own stupidity prevented me to see [Chorus] I guess this is the end I?m no longer considered your friend All this time I was used I was oblivious to the news YOUR no longer MY friend WHAT WERE YOU THINKING? [Verse #1] One-minute kids are having fun Next silenced by a gun All connected with the same inspiration All to get an education {Chorus} What were you thinking Were you drinking? When you put that bullet into that kids head! In one shot, that kid was dead! [Verse #2] One victim shot because he was black One kid shooting because he?s whack One victim running One kid gunning {Chorus} What were you thinking Were you drinking? When you put that bullet into that kids head! In one shot, that kid was dead! [Verse #3] few escaped with there lives everybody cries for the wives of the teacher who dies the scene was obscene everybody screams {Chorus} What were you thinking Were you drinking? When you put that bullet into that kids head! In one shot, that kid was dead!
  9. NO fortunetly I have never had to live through that experience, I used to write about my experiences, but now its mainly what my freinds/other people have gone through, and I know somebody somewhere has felt the pain in this way.
  10. So for posting so many, I found these ones after I posted last, I am TERRIBLY SORRY! this song is about Teens, and how they are falsely judged and accused of certain things....ENJOY! {Verse #1} As you stare at me, with your judging eyes You think you have me figured out Your image of me is false, that?s the use of the lies You think I have no respect In interviews all I get is reject When I enter stores I am a suspect [Chorus] You say I?m a Drug user You say I an Alcohol abuser You say I?m a rebel You say I?m the Devil {SPOKEN} Is it right? NO! People say that I am going to light it up? You people MUST believe me!! The last thing I lit up was a Football Scoreboard The Day I long for is the day you people stop passing judgements And seen for who we REALLY ARE! Straight A students or Football players or sports athletes or Generous caring people or Teens who just want to have fun In NO WAY! Are we drug-using menaces! We have lives and futures to live, we have no use for Drugs. Its funny isn?t it, you people told us not to discriminate, and yet you are discriminating against us! And despite it all, we still care, honour, and respect you people for who you are? And yet we are the ones who are bad? Yeah that?s what the media makes you think! I feel it is now? {Verse #2} Time to set this record right You see I my future is bright I don?t fight, instead I write People Judge me, You cant see Your blind One day you people will find That your wrong when you say? [CHORUS]
  11. [VERSE 1] It seems like yesterday... It seems like yesterday we were walking hand in hand We'd take walks on the beach, and go to concerts of our favorite band Now, today...alone is how I stand! When I got the call, I went into shock I stood there, wondering how this could have happened! Why are people so senseless? Are all humans so hopeless? I guess it was a mistake... I don't think that guy meant it... But it happened! AND NOW I'M LEFT WITH NOTHING! {Bridge}{Spoken by MARK} I can still feel the warmth of your hand in mine... I can still taste your sweet kiss... I can still hear you say, "I love you"... I can still hear you laugh at my jokes... I can still feel you in my arms... I can't believe you have been taken from me! We had so many plans... But, that one man made that the move It changed many lives that night... I am left wondering if I am to be loved again... Families left without a daughter... Friends left without a friend... I can still see your face when I first said I love you... I can still see your face when I'd hold you close... But all I have are the memories... {Chorus} I had you... I loved you Now I have nothing but memories of you Your picture stays with me I am left with nothing I wanted to be I had everything... One night, it all left me One man, one mistake... [VERSE 2] heartbroken and torn, I entered that building... there she was...lying there...not saying anything... I stood over her, trying not to think about what had happened Then the man...the man who made that grave mistake that evening, entered I wanted nothing more then to tell him what I thought of him... But I knew that isn't what she'd want...he feels bad enough... As he approaches, my sadness grows... He tells me he hasn't had another drink since, and he was greatly sorry... I accepted it, but I knew full well she wasn't coming back.. I want her to live, I want her with me!! {Chorus} I had you... I loved you Now I have nothing but memories of you Your picture stays with me I am left with nothing I wanted to be I had everything... One night, it all left me One man, one mistake... [VERSE 3] Now, laying in my room, thinking I beg for her to come back to me And in the night, it glows...the wind heightens Then, she appears... she tells me not to be sad And that she is always with me... She gently kisses me, and it becomes black again... I go to my car in tears, it was a mistake I regret... I crossed the centerline, and fate had that Transport hit me head on... I didn't make it... another family morns... Another life lost... On the good side...I get to be with her again... {Chorus} I had you... I loved you Now I have nothing but memories of you Your picture stays with me I am left with nothing I wanted to be I had everything... One night, it all left me One man, one mistake...
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