Ender Posted July 16, 2006 Report Share Posted July 16, 2006 Being torn between two people Long ago i thought it would be supreme Two amazing girls what more could i need I started to fear being torn at the seams But as it seems im being torn at the heart Im being torn apart(in a tale of two loves) And late at night the wondering will start When i fall asleep who will i dream of She had caught my eye right from the beginning My heart stopped beating and my head went spinning So i gathered my courage and gathered my strength I told you to get you id go to great lengths You answerered with a smirk and smile in your eye I said if youd let me id be happy being your guy After brushing my hair and beard on my face Your lips looked so amazing i had to have a taste Long ago i thought it would be supreme Two amazing girls what more could i need I started to fear being torn at the seams But as it seems im being torn at the heart Im being torn apart(in a tale of two loves) And late at night the wondering will start When i fall asleep who will i dream of Things were going good hell they were going great She starts to fade away and drifts towards her ex I tried to stop it but found that i was to late I had to get used to his arm being on your neck Sure we stayed friends i called you each night But inside i was broken worse than a ship wreck And i called you each morning to tell you good day She moved on yet my feelings just lingered away The impact she had on my life i found to be unfair But she broke my heart with such art i didnt care Still i told her i loved her and i would be there Best friends we became to be i took what i could get After hurting me so bad i wasnt over her as of yet Her new boyfriend rubbed it in that she was his I took the hint and went away finding what love is Long ago i thought it would be supreme Two amazing girls what more could i need I started to fear being torn at the seams But as it seems im being torn at the heart Im being torn apart(in a tale of two loves) And late at night the wondering will start When i fall asleep who will i dream of I met another girl things started to move fast We held good conversation til she asked of my past Holding in tears and forcing a smile id just laugh "If you knew Where ive been youd never come back" She took that as an answer and watched the dawn I asked her about what she thought of me and her "If you knew what i thought youd be long gone" A smiles how i replied and felt her fill the hole Something was still missing she couldnt fill the role We grew close and were perfect for awhile But somehow id end up ruining her perfect smile My feelings still lingered for my first real girl We started talking again and it made my world As hard as it was and as bad as it made me feel I went back to her and left my girl with a broken wheel Long ago i thought it would be supreme Two amazing girls what more could i need I started to fear being torn at the seams But as it seems im being torn at the heart Im being torn apart(in a tale of two loves) And late at night the wondering will start When i fall asleep who will i dream of Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel2Velvet Posted July 18, 2006 Report Share Posted July 18, 2006 Great work, James. In addition to a creative story line, this has a driving rythmn and terrific pace to it. In the right hands, this could make a dynamite song! Hope it does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elephantxlovexmedly Posted November 21, 2006 Report Share Posted November 21, 2006 you have so much talent. i love all the work that you've done. i wish you wrote more often. this one is so real it brought tears to my eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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