durtvandutch Posted March 10, 2005 Report Posted March 10, 2005 This life is nutchin w/out Love & I wouldn?t have Love If I didn?t have you, Love Couldn?t imagine wut I would do If I didn?t have you , Love Roam this land lost; Searchin for a clue Some might say I still do But I?m halfway to the answer Cuz I DID find you , Love
TrampledUnderFoot Posted March 11, 2005 Report Posted March 11, 2005 I'm not a fan of the very beginning (nutchin'?), but the rest was so happy! Good work!
durtvandutch Posted March 16, 2005 Author Report Posted March 16, 2005 Nutchin is my lazy way of sayin nothing.. Glad to see people actually like that poem!
Earth-Angel Posted March 16, 2005 Report Posted March 16, 2005 It has an "urban" feel to it, I dig it.
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