RBB Posted January 16, 2005 Report Share Posted January 16, 2005 I've rewritten this song for a school project, it includes syllables as the project needed. Now Lets Decide Verse 1 I re-mem-ber, that night that we met. (10) Lost in those eyes I?ll nev-er for-get. (10) Your figure, your form, bless-ed in the least. (10) Your what I?ve want-ed, you?re just what I need. (10) Verse 2 I re-mem-ber each and ev-ery time. (9) Your litt-le thoughts would just cross my mind. (9) I would think a-bout your litt-le smile. Then I?d fade a-way for a little while . Chorus I?m left breath-less right here, wil-ling to do. (10) An-y-thing for us, an-y-thing for you. (10) I?m right here liv-ing, be-side you each day. (10) Blessed with this feel-ing, that won?t go away. (10) Verse 3 I re-mem-ber, that night that we met. (10) Lost in those eyes I?ll nev-er for-get. (10) I can?t even i-mag-ine a life with-out you. (11) A day ?to- day so empty. An end-ing so soon. (11) Chorus I?m left breath-less right here, wil-ling to do. (10) An-y-thing for us, an-y-thing for you. (10) I?m right here liv-ing, be-side you each day. (10) Blessed with this feel-ing, that won?t go away. (10) Chorus I?m just left with you, will-ing to see. (9) The future that?s set, for you and me. (9) I know that this life might pass us by. (9) But life is to love, now lets de-cide. (9) Anyhow, just to say for those who wanted to hear my songs, they are on www.purevolume.com/robertblackburn. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko90 Posted January 17, 2005 Report Share Posted January 17, 2005 Well Rob that was very well done, very well enjoyed by me!!! Very well written by you...good job and keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Teresa34896 Posted January 19, 2005 Report Share Posted January 19, 2005 Good, passionate stuff. I would only change the line: ...Your figure, your form, BLESSED IN THE LEAST? As I understand it, you are saying that her/his figure and form are not exactly attractive. So, if I misunderstood it, somebody else might too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RBB Posted January 20, 2005 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2005 Thanks, you have a point, it could confuse others. Maybe, Your figure, your form, blessed, yes indeed. That is what I changed the line to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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