Mairi Posted December 31, 2004 Report Share Posted December 31, 2004 Yeah.......creative juices flowing again.......this is a song (not written one in ages !), slow, ballad-y type thing. Without Pity I am the proof that History repeats itself I, yet again, am the last one left on the shelf but bitterness will not help I wonder why I'm always left alone and scared I can't describe How it feels when no one cares but bitterness will not help chorus For all the good in the world hearts break to make you appriciate happiness when you find it But don't pity me, whatever you do I am the reason that All my hopes are shattered I can't control My thoughts, they are all scattered but bitterness will mot help I have the feeling you should cherish the love you recieve I feel that my heart is easy to decieve but bitterness will not help chorus Ok, that's it. Thoughts and comments muchly appriciated. Bye Bye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted December 31, 2004 Report Share Posted December 31, 2004 I really like the way you write Mairi. It's full of whatever you are feeling at the time you write it, be it anger or sadness or indifference. Very good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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