Without Pity

[Mairi]

Yeah.......creative juices flowing again.......this is a song (not written one in ages !), slow, ballad-y type thing.

Without Pity

I am the proof that

History repeats itself

I, yet again, am

the last one left on the shelf

but bitterness will not help

I wonder why

I'm always left alone and scared

I can't describe

How it feels when no one cares

but bitterness will not help

chorus

For all the good in the world

hearts break to make you appriciate

happiness when you find it

But don't pity me, whatever you do

I am the reason that

All my hopes are shattered

I can't control

My thoughts, they are all scattered

but bitterness will mot help

I have the feeling

you should cherish the love you recieve

I feel that

my heart is easy to decieve

but bitterness will not help

chorus

Ok, that's it. Thoughts and comments muchly appriciated.

Bye Bye

[Earth-Angel]

I really like the way you write Mairi. It's full of whatever you are feeling at the time you write it, be it anger or sadness or indifference. Very good!