Rayzor Posted March 18, 2015 Report Posted March 18, 2015 Walking through the winter forest Deep snow crackles under my feet I've been walking for days Trying to find someone to meet Black trees with their brittle branches Loom overhead surrounding me Heavy sky overcast, deep gray No sound comes from the wooded deep Alone in my mind, marching on Not stopping to rest or sleep Continuing a mighty quest This heroic pace I must keep Winding through snow-filled forests Feeling a change in cooling air Looking around, trying to see Biting wind slips through untamed hair There's a noise off in the distance Cannot make out what it may be Perhaps there is someone else here Or my ears simply fooling me Setting off at a faster pace Desperate to find another Nearly running through thick snow now Footprints under that tree cover! Following fresh tracks with great hope New-found hope, warmth around this tree Finding those thinly-covered prints Swiftly followed, belong to me
Rayzor Posted March 19, 2015 Author Report Posted March 19, 2015 Thanks Ron I had this on FB (I think) but it's been "modified" to get rid of repeated words (me, my, I, and, the, etc) so I could make room for adjectives. See how I learn so quickly from your initial input, oh grand-master? "We're not worthy!!"
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