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I have borne the thoughts that no man should bear

I have pondered death and life

I have searched for love only to find empty dreams

I have felt anger and disgust towards those who have done me no harm

I have associated myself with those who have shown me only spite

I have known the darkness

But my dog is sleeping in my lap

The music is soothing

And I am happy

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There you go, man. You put it down as honestly as you can and somehow it begins to make a bit more sense. It seems to not cramp the mind so much, but seems to fit into the whole plan a bit better. Writing rules, formats or themes do not mean squat, when a person opens up honestly about what's really heavy on their mind.

I like this a lot for all those reasons.

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