"where are you?" a work in progress...

[Blue Fish]

"Where are you"

I hunt for you but your not there

i plead with you but your back is turned

why? oh how did i get in this snare?

Love is a lesson that can never be learned.

Your eyes are cold tables of stone

and your lips never let a smile show

do you care that your on your own?

i love you yet you'll never know.

Your body’s here but where are you?

a person is more then they appear

Aristotle said "you are what you do"

what have you done that cost you so dear?

Umm these are just some lirics i wrote, there are more verses but i won't bore you. what do you think? Please bear in mind that its a work in progress...

[Blue Fish]

I would really like your comments so i know if its worth going to a music writer with to put some music to it. Really, i'm serious belive it or not...