Ender Posted January 5, 2005 Report Share Posted January 5, 2005 Yea this is just a little thing i thought of when i came back from vacation, if you like or not i dont care, but i would like some feedback Thought it was over my pain at an end End of my lonelines amen Bottled up anger escaped through a pen Settled down and considered you my friend Didnt see you for awhile and then My heart cried when i saw you again You left me during the holidays remember? You were everything you defined my existence You made me cry at the end of December We were perfect i dont care about difference I am scared and lost in your absence Its little things i miss i miss your fragrance Now i am left alone to deal with my grievance Thought it was over my pain at an end End of my lonelines amen Bottled up anger escaped through a pen Settled down and considered you my friend Didnt see you for awhile and then My heart cried when i saw you again Do me a favor dont stand so cloe to me Yours is the last face i need to see I want you back but i dont know who to be Let go of my heart it longs to be free Please come back ill give you what you need Dont say no dont make my heart bleed Thought it was over my pain at an end End of my lonelines amen Bottled up anger escaped through a pen Settled down and considered you my friend Didnt see you for awhile and then My heart cried when i saw you again I swear to be there if your in pain Call and ill be runnin faster than a train If i ever hear you callin out my name Ill come to you faster than a plain Though i hate it ill play the love game After being with you ill never be the same Im living in pain wont you end this reign Look at my pillow count all the tear stains Even through all this my love still remains Thought it was over my pain at an end End of my lonelines amen Bottled up anger escaped through a pen Settled down and considered you my friend Didnt see you for awhile and then My heart cried when i saw you again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karhul Posted January 6, 2005 Report Share Posted January 6, 2005 Is this about sadness and resentment?. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mairi Posted January 6, 2005 Report Share Posted January 6, 2005 i loved the rhyming scheme you used, very effective and inventive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ender Posted January 6, 2005 Author Report Share Posted January 6, 2005 This was more about thinking that your over someone, than realizing that you still miss them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sweetie62 Posted January 6, 2005 Report Share Posted January 6, 2005 i loved the rhyming scheme you used, very effective and inventive. i agree the rhyming was great! awesome poem keep it up -em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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