Who Am I?

[Sweet Jane 61]

Who Am I?

A face in the mirror

is it familiar

I don't know

tired eyes

looking at me

shadowing my soul

Paled skin drawn

can it be mine

surely it's not

years past

diminished softness

besprinkled with spots

Multiple strands of grey

when did this happen

where was I

dullness surfaces

aging gracefully

a romantic lie

[Rayzor]

I like this. I can feel the confusion at the start & realisation at the end. Well done SJ!

[Sweet Jane 61]

Thanks Ray. I dont mind being older, but I am spending too much money on hair color!

[Shawna]

I love the last two lines particularly. Speaks to my soul. Well done.