TheLizard Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Nobody ever told me it would be like this The light hurts my eyes and the dark is frightening There’s all this talk about Heaven and Hell There are other people out here Some of them look like me I don’t know if they think like me I don’t know how to handle them I don’t know if they feel like me I’m not sure how to feel at all Love is good, but it leads to disappointment Hatred is bad, but it leads to power Open up mama, I want to go back Things were simpler there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shawna Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 Tim, you've done it again. I love this. Especially the last line. I must confess that the "open up mama" part is a little disturbing. Overall, though, it's quite moving. You are a rare talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viaene Posted January 30, 2008 Report Share Posted January 30, 2008 only the last to lines somehow reveal the meaning so I had to read it again to fully understand the beginning, great writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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