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Rayzor

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  1. That's the hardest part for me as well!

    That's why I'm just writing bits at a time "off the cuff" to see what spills out. I have the dialogue in my head but everything else is missing. Trying to write the scenery or events leading up to the conversation has held back the actual writing for about half a year.

    :sad: :puppyeyes:

    We'll see how it works then & perhaps you could write a story, too!

    You're always reading books so maybe you can write something for others to read! :grin: :wink:

  2. I'm starting a story in Creative Writing that rambled on in my head one night (kept me awake until sun-up) but I never bothered to write it down thinking it was a waste of time. The voices come back every now and again, though. It seems the people in my head don't want me to sleep. Maybe if I tell their tale they'll shut the hell up.

    Anyone else have these problems with the voices in their heads?

    If so, how many do you have? I count 6 yammering fools in my mind.

    :couch:

  3. Upon entering the kitchen she was suddenly grabbed from behind with a knife to her throat.

    "Don't scream. So much as a whimper and there'll be a hell of a mess."

    She remained silent, but inside she'd become a raving lunatic.

    "Please don't scream," he seemed less threatening in his new tone, "I really don't want to hurt you."

    Her mind was racing, along with her heart, trying to grasp the situation. Yet she found a small part of herself applauding her restraint.

    "I'm gonna ask you some questions and you can just nod or shake your head. Understand?"

    She nodded slowly, Feeling the steel blade touch the underside of her jaw in doing so.

    "Is there anyone else here?"

    She turned her head slowly from left to right.

    "I'll move the knife away a bit if you promise not to do something stupid. You promise?"

    A slow nod.

    "I really hope it's the truth. I really, really don't want to do anything that hurts you." He paused. "Well, physically I guess. I kinda hurt you inside already. Sorry about that."

    (more coming if wanted)

  4. Ten reasons only 2 Songfactors participated in the last Top Ten List game.

    10. All other songfactors were hungover for the past month.

    9. Probably because there are alot better places to eat than McDonald's.

    8. I felt compelled to complete it, so I participated.

    7. Canadians are always polite & lovable so McDonald's didn't run that campaign here in fear of going bankrupt.

    6. The others were too busy standing in line at McDonalds

    5. I prefer the In N Out burger.

    4. I never post anything on Songfacts as I'm new here.

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