TwilightVampire
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Thnk you for the comment
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You have some extremely creative phrasing in this piece, Bec. It also contains a grammatic ebb and flow that "mirrors" the ups and downs in the subject's life. You have a skill at transferring emotions in a succinct and poingnant manner. Good work!
thnk you so much
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hi back
i write poems
i listen to music
i go to church
i am also a airhead
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Thnk you
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Deadly Poison
your the vampire standing behind me
waiting for the moment to strike & send
your poison into me from that one deadly
strike from your teeth sinking into my neck
as U drain me of my blood , I stand there
unable to move unable to breath nor think
in your presence I try to free myself but I fail
I can't move I am frozen as U drink from
my precious skin of the warm blood trickling
down the back of my neck ,while U hold me
and keep drinking not caring that U may end
up kill me during your lustfull attack to drink
the one thing U crave ,which is me and my blood
your the poison within killing me by each second
can't you see that your killing me by every move
you make I am already dead now that you drank
the last drop of my blood I lay lifeless in your hands
your crying when you realized you killed me
your the poison attacking me for the lust you linger
for which is me and my blood the taste I bear
you linger for ,which in the end killed me
you never wanted that but it happened
anyway I am dead ,dead on the inside
you were a secret vampire taking my
dead soul and bringing it alive but then
let go and dropped the precious glass jar
that held my soul and U dropped it and it broke
killing my soul making me dead
how I linger to be alive again
to feel the warmth of joy
and the warmth of love
and the warmth of anything good
but that won't happen...
since the last drop of me was drank
and my soul shattered
by,Bec
(about my ex how i felt when he broke up with me)
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Roses are red
just like you
Roses are red
just like the knife
Roses are red
Just like my shatterd heart
Roses are red
just like the blood in my veins
Roses are black
Just like your soul
Roses are black
Just like the knife
Roses are black
just like death
Roses are black
just like cancer
Roses are black
Just like pain
Roses are Purple
just like me
Roses are Purple
Just like anti-socials
Roses re purple
Just like cutters
Roses re Purple
Just like our veins
Roses re Purple
Just like Our blood
Roses are Blue
Just like the ice
Roses are blue
Just like rain
Roses are blue
Just like me
By,Bec
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The links worked for me : http://www.angelfire.com/tn/plath/
thnk you
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hmm the pages of her poems wouldn't work
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No i never heard of her or him
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Thnk you Edna
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thnk you
you both
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Thnk You
and nope
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there is....click on my fusion....or click on someones name for a private topic....then click on start a private topic....when someone sends you a private message, there will be a little flashing envelope on top...click on that to view it.
thnk you
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maybe
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Thnk you
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i am just letting people know of a band that is never heard of they re not local either they re famous and have cds but they re gothic but a really good band i like them so u can check them out here Diary Of Dreams
and there website Diary Of Dreams website
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i was curious to why there isn't a Priavate Messaging system here...?
sorry just any board i been on has one
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i didn't think your ava was u i just didn't know if u were a girl or guy
sorry
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thnk you Sir
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Shattered Mirror
the girl standing in front of the mirror
wondering what she did wrong to deserve this
wondering why its so hard to keep her heart unhurt
she wonders what would be best to do
Disappear or become shadow so no one can love her
She wonders what she did wrong to lose everything
She wonders what she could have done to keep it
but now she finds nothing to live for,yet she keeps going
she keeps walking and moving and putting on some fake
happy acts but sometimes she is actually happy
The girl standing in front of the mirror
wonders why she must be a disgrace
why the snow around her melts
why the rain turns to ash against her skin
why the moon turns black as she walks
why the sun hides when she comes out
why the fire turns to smoke when she comes
The girl standing in front of the mirror
wonders why she betrayed herself
into thinking she could love anyone
when she couldn't even love herself
enough to take care of herself
she wonders why pain comes to her
when she touches rain it turns to ash
when the moon shines it turns black
when the sun is out it hides when she comes out
The Girl standing in the mirror
wish's to be someone better
someone anyone would love
and not ask of favors of her
just love her as if she was there own
she wish's to be thin yet she can't
get the image in her mind to come
to play
The girl standing in the mirror
sees herself as a freak
a nobody a no good
hellhound sent to destroy earth
and humanity why does she wish to
be an angel to seek happiness
when she can't be who she wants to be
The girl standing in the mirror
shatters the mirror
hating the image in the mirror
of who she became
she became shadow
a creature afraid of people
afraid of day afraid of moon
afraid of ash and smoke
this girl seeks one thing
and that is happiness
for eternity
by,Bec
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i'm new
my name is Bec
and i am 17
HI
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name ~Bec
Age~17
Stuff i do~Comp and music and poetry and late night movies
Fav bands~Diary ofdreams,Slipknot,cradle of filth,papa roach,Bjork,+ more
Fav poet~Edgar Allen Poe