EagleEye0
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Yeah I am more concerned about content than grammar. But those changes must be made. I agree. I want it to sound like an inspirational piece not a stellar acid trip...ect
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Please Reply. I think it is superb. What do you think?
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The Notion of the Ocean comes through the wind
its like a treasure unlatched within.
Unearthed from an opaque abyss
a spirit floats that you can?t miss
Far and Wide there?s nothing to hide
having to little would be suicide
Tranquil or Turbulent you will find
then again its all in the mind
This bliss is one with sand
two with the land
and three with the me upon the reaches of sea
You view the birds of above
when deep down your searching for love
love of myst and mystic
love of the blade
to evade
the accolade
of life of strife stricken with sorrow the life you made as a renegade.
People pray to feel this way seeking the meals, zeal, and deals of the day
they attain the limelight with nothing to say and nothing to play, if something, with profound delay
The efforts of many are subpar
Striving for prestige without getting far;
The crowd scoffs at your valiant attempt
As you height off you develop contempt.
The standards of the world guile you to swirl
Similar to an oyster enclosing her pearl
took you in
what a sin
, imbued you thin
, no a kin,
spat you out with a sonorous bellow
down a common road with an uncommon fellow
while your peers enjoyed to mellow
an incessant goad to continue the road of fun with a smile
you deeply reminisce it wasn?t worthwhile
it is hard to find people to please
that?s why you venture to the crystalline waters and turquoise seas
Pleasure always feels like a breeze
In truth its merely a tease
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I msu tinform you that 1967 is the best year for classic rock. There area a plethora od reasons why the Summer of Love profoundly impacted classic rock
Classic Rock Albums:
Surrealistic Pillow_Jefferson Airplane
This album was JA's breakthrough Lp yielding the two classic rock songs "White Rabbit" and "Somebody to Love" and the less successful "Embryonic Journey." This albums is amamzing from start ti finish and is a must have for any ardent classic rock fan.
Days of Future Passed_The Moody Blues
AFTER A DISMAL r&B career they shifted their efforts to a more progressisve direction. This albumn established the format for a "concept" album. It enlapsed a whole day and yielded the hits "Tuesday Afternoons" and "Nights in White satin"
Sgt. Peppers Lonely Hearts Club Band_The Beatles
From begining to end it is impeccable. Best Beatles albums of all time.
Buffalo Springfield_Bufalo Springfield
you get the picture...
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The Notion of the Ocean comes through the wind
its like a treasure unlatched within.
Unearthed from an opaque abyss
a spirit floats that you can?t miss
Far and Wide there?s nothing to hide
having to little would be suicide
Tranquil or Turbulent you will find
then again its all in the mind
This bliss is one with sand
two with the land
and three with the me upon the reaches of sea
You view the birds of above
when deep down your searching for love
love of myst and mystic
love of the blade
to evade
the accolade
of life of strife stricken with sorrow the life you made as a renegade.
People pray to feel this way seeking the meals, zeal, and deals of the day
they attain the limelight with nothing to say and nothing to play, if something, with profound delay
The efforts of many are subpar
Striving for prestige without getting far;
The crowd scoffs at your valiant attempt
As you height off you develop contempt.
The standards of the world guile you to swirl
Similar to an oyster enclosing her pearl
took you in
what a sin
, imbued you thin
, no a kin,
spat you out with a sonorous bellow
down a common road with an uncommon fellow
while your peers enjoyed to mellow
an incessant goad to continue the road of fun with a smile
you deeply reminisce it wasn?t worthwhile
it is hard to find people to please
that?s why you venture to the crystalline waters and turquoise seas
Pleasure always feels like a breeze
In truth its merely a tease
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"Xanadu" Rush
"Do It Again" Steely Dan
Come Sail Away" Styx
"Baba O'Reaily" The Who
Anything really exceeding forty seconds of instrumentals I consider long so I'm pretty impatient and here are my picks.
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The Very Best of Cream
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"Hotel California" The Eagles
"Bohemian Rhapsody" Queen
"Come Sail Away" Styx
"Staiway to Heaven" Led Zepelin
"Under the Bridge" The Red Hot Chili Peppers
These are my favorite single songs in seriatem.
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Nirvana spraked the grunge movemnent in the late eighties. Albums such as Bleach, Nevermind, and In Utero make them the best grunge band of all time. Moreover, they have the hits to prove it such as Lithium, Smells Like Teen Spirit, Rape Me and Come as You Are. In addition, their image appealed to more people than the image of their grunge counterparts such as Alice in Chains and Stone Temple Pilots. Soundgarden is second Superunkown is awesome.
Overrode Glory
in Creative Writing
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[This and a completely experimental piece of writing that I wrote today. Its 1000% experimental. an amalgamation of poetry, storytelling and perpetual morals]
Overrode Glory
I search for pleasure
And bury treasure
I vie for the everlasting happiness
And dig a deep hole
I carefully place this hefty chest in this gaping fall
And lower it slowly and protect its soul
I shove dirt upon this fallow ground
Until it reaches the brim
Walk away
The sun plastered the fallow terrain
And my mind became hazy and insane
Viewing double near and afar
Impressions were marred
I saddled up and trotted along
The lane disgorged me at a pebbly coast
A couple down the way having an exultant toast
Clouds crept upon the sky waiting to cry
I ventured to the water
Soaked my feet
And viewed beyond
The woman suffered from distraught heart
The man offered solace
It was insufficient
She despaired and sadly departed in tot the opaque distance
I approached the man
And phrased solace as best as I can
?It happen to the best of us,? I remarked
?What do you know?? he loudly barked.
?More than you,? I confidently replied
?What?s your name, sir?? I drifted
?Malik.?
?I?ve got something to share with you.?
?What??
?She is sad because of you and her past life.?
?What are you getting at??
?Your impatience is intolerable and your ignorance is insufferable.?
You must evoke the past jubilations that seem so foreign to her now.? I continued.
And you ignorance is hindering yourself to learn about her exuberant history.?
The clouds were tumbling down the horizon and the moon floated off in the ceaseless sky. Malik will, hopefully, do what?s right. What he seeks is my protection. (To be continued)