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  1. [This and a completely experimental piece of writing that I wrote today. Its 1000% experimental. an amalgamation of poetry, storytelling and perpetual morals]

    Overrode Glory

    I search for pleasure

    And bury treasure

    I vie for the everlasting happiness

    And dig a deep hole

    I carefully place this hefty chest in this gaping fall

    And lower it slowly and protect its soul

    I shove dirt upon this fallow ground

    Until it reaches the brim

    Walk away

    The sun plastered the fallow terrain

    And my mind became hazy and insane

    Viewing double near and afar

    Impressions were marred

    I saddled up and trotted along

    The lane disgorged me at a pebbly coast

    A couple down the way having an exultant toast

    Clouds crept upon the sky waiting to cry

    I ventured to the water

    Soaked my feet

    And viewed beyond

    The woman suffered from distraught heart

    The man offered solace

    It was insufficient

    She despaired and sadly departed in tot the opaque distance

    I approached the man

    And phrased solace as best as I can

    ?It happen to the best of us,? I remarked

    ?What do you know?? he loudly barked.

    ?More than you,? I confidently replied

    ?What?s your name, sir?? I drifted

    ?Malik.?

    ?I?ve got something to share with you.?

    ?What??

    ?She is sad because of you and her past life.?

    ?What are you getting at??

    ?Your impatience is intolerable and your ignorance is insufferable.?

    You must evoke the past jubilations that seem so foreign to her now.? I continued.

    And you ignorance is hindering yourself to learn about her exuberant history.?

    The clouds were tumbling down the horizon and the moon floated off in the ceaseless sky. Malik will, hopefully, do what?s right. What he seeks is my protection. (To be continued)

  2. The Notion of the Ocean comes through the wind

    its like a treasure unlatched within.

    Unearthed from an opaque abyss

    a spirit floats that you can?t miss

    Far and Wide there?s nothing to hide

    having to little would be suicide

    Tranquil or Turbulent you will find

    then again its all in the mind

    This bliss is one with sand

    two with the land

    and three with the me upon the reaches of sea

    You view the birds of above

    when deep down your searching for love

    love of myst and mystic

    love of the blade

    to evade

    the accolade

    of life of strife stricken with sorrow the life you made as a renegade.

    People pray to feel this way seeking the meals, zeal, and deals of the day

    they attain the limelight with nothing to say and nothing to play, if something, with profound delay

    The efforts of many are subpar

    Striving for prestige without getting far;

    The crowd scoffs at your valiant attempt

    As you height off you develop contempt.

    The standards of the world guile you to swirl

    Similar to an oyster enclosing her pearl

    took you in

    what a sin

    , imbued you thin

    , no a kin,

    spat you out with a sonorous bellow

    down a common road with an uncommon fellow

    while your peers enjoyed to mellow

    an incessant goad to continue the road of fun with a smile

    you deeply reminisce it wasn?t worthwhile

    it is hard to find people to please

    that?s why you venture to the crystalline waters and turquoise seas

    Pleasure always feels like a breeze

    In truth its merely a tease

  3. I msu tinform you that 1967 is the best year for classic rock. There area a plethora od reasons why the Summer of Love profoundly impacted classic rock

    Classic Rock Albums:

    Surrealistic Pillow_Jefferson Airplane

    This album was JA's breakthrough Lp yielding the two classic rock songs "White Rabbit" and "Somebody to Love" and the less successful "Embryonic Journey." This albums is amamzing from start ti finish and is a must have for any ardent classic rock fan.

    Days of Future Passed_The Moody Blues

    AFTER A DISMAL r&B career they shifted their efforts to a more progressisve direction. This albumn established the format for a "concept" album. It enlapsed a whole day and yielded the hits "Tuesday Afternoons" and "Nights in White satin"

    Sgt. Peppers Lonely Hearts Club Band_The Beatles

    From begining to end it is impeccable. Best Beatles albums of all time.

    Buffalo Springfield_Bufalo Springfield

    you get the picture...

  4. The Notion of the Ocean comes through the wind

    its like a treasure unlatched within.

    Unearthed from an opaque abyss

    a spirit floats that you can?t miss

    Far and Wide there?s nothing to hide

    having to little would be suicide

    Tranquil or Turbulent you will find

    then again its all in the mind

    This bliss is one with sand

    two with the land

    and three with the me upon the reaches of sea

    You view the birds of above

    when deep down your searching for love

    love of myst and mystic

    love of the blade

    to evade

    the accolade

    of life of strife stricken with sorrow the life you made as a renegade.

    People pray to feel this way seeking the meals, zeal, and deals of the day

    they attain the limelight with nothing to say and nothing to play, if something, with profound delay

    The efforts of many are subpar

    Striving for prestige without getting far;

    The crowd scoffs at your valiant attempt

    As you height off you develop contempt.

    The standards of the world guile you to swirl

    Similar to an oyster enclosing her pearl

    took you in

    what a sin

    , imbued you thin

    , no a kin,

    spat you out with a sonorous bellow

    down a common road with an uncommon fellow

    while your peers enjoyed to mellow

    an incessant goad to continue the road of fun with a smile

    you deeply reminisce it wasn?t worthwhile

    it is hard to find people to please

    that?s why you venture to the crystalline waters and turquoise seas

    Pleasure always feels like a breeze

    In truth its merely a tease

  5. Nirvana spraked the grunge movemnent in the late eighties. Albums such as Bleach, Nevermind, and In Utero make them the best grunge band of all time. Moreover, they have the hits to prove it such as Lithium, Smells Like Teen Spirit, Rape Me and Come as You Are. In addition, their image appealed to more people than the image of their grunge counterparts such as Alice in Chains and Stone Temple Pilots. Soundgarden is second Superunkown is awesome.

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