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[This and a completely experimental piece of writing that I wrote today. Its 1000% experimental. an amalgamation of poetry, storytelling and perpetual morals] Overrode Glory I search for pleasure And bury treasure I vie for the everlasting happiness And dig a deep hole I carefully place this hefty chest in this gaping fall And lower it slowly and protect its soul I shove dirt upon this fallow ground Until it reaches the brim Walk away The sun plastered the fallow terrain And my mind became hazy and insane Viewing double near and afar Impressions were marred I saddled up and trotted along The lane disgorged me at a pebbly coast A couple down the way having an exultant toast Clouds crept upon the sky waiting to cry I ventured to the water Soaked my feet And viewed beyond The woman suffered from distraught heart The man offered solace It was insufficient She despaired and sadly departed in tot the opaque distance I approached the man And phrased solace as best as I can ?It happen to the best of us,? I remarked ?What do you know?? he loudly barked. ?More than you,? I confidently replied ?What?s your name, sir?? I drifted ?Malik.? ?I?ve got something to share with you.? ?What?? ?She is sad because of you and her past life.? ?What are you getting at?? ?Your impatience is intolerable and your ignorance is insufferable.? You must evoke the past jubilations that seem so foreign to her now.? I continued. And you ignorance is hindering yourself to learn about her exuberant history.? The clouds were tumbling down the horizon and the moon floated off in the ceaseless sky. Malik will, hopefully, do what?s right. What he seeks is my protection. (To be continued)

Yeah I am more concerned about content than grammar. But those changes must be made. I agree. I want it to sound like an inspirational piece not a stellar acid trip...ect

Please Reply. I think it is superb. What do you think?

The Notion of the Ocean comes through the wind its like a treasure unlatched within. Unearthed from an opaque abyss a spirit floats that you can?t miss Far and Wide there?s nothing to hide having to little would be suicide Tranquil or Turbulent you will find then again its all in the mind This bliss is one with sand two with the land and three with the me upon the reaches of sea You view the birds of above when deep down your searching for love love of myst and mystic love of the blade to evade the accolade of life of strife stricken with sorrow the life you made as a renegade. People pray to feel this way seeking the meals, zeal, and deals of the day they attain the limelight with nothing to say and nothing to play, if something, with profound delay The efforts of many are subpar Striving for prestige without getting far; The crowd scoffs at your valiant attempt As you height off you develop contempt. The standards of the world guile you to swirl Similar to an oyster enclosing her pearl took you in what a sin , imbued you thin , no a kin, spat you out with a sonorous bellow down a common road with an uncommon fellow while your peers enjoyed to mellow an incessant goad to continue the road of fun with a smile you deeply reminisce it wasn?t worthwhile it is hard to find people to please that?s why you venture to the crystalline waters and turquoise seas Pleasure always feels like a breeze In truth its merely a tease

I msu tinform you that 1967 is the best year for classic rock. There area a plethora od reasons why the Summer of Love profoundly impacted classic rock Classic Rock Albums: Surrealistic Pillow_Jefferson Airplane This album was JA's breakthrough Lp yielding the two classic rock songs "White Rabbit" and "Somebody to Love" and the less successful "Embryonic Journey." This albums is amamzing from start ti finish and is a must have for any ardent classic rock fan. Days of Future Passed_The Moody Blues AFTER A DISMAL r&B career they shifted their efforts to a more progressisve direction. This albumn established the format for a "concept" album. It enlapsed a whole day and yielded the hits "Tuesday Afternoons" and "Nights in White satin" Sgt. Peppers Lonely Hearts Club Band_The Beatles From begining to end it is impeccable. Best Beatles albums of all time. Buffalo Springfield_Bufalo Springfield you get the picture...

The Notion of the Ocean comes through the wind its like a treasure unlatched within. Unearthed from an opaque abyss a spirit floats that you can?t miss Far and Wide there?s nothing to hide having to little would be suicide Tranquil or Turbulent you will find then again its all in the mind This bliss is one with sand two with the land and three with the me upon the reaches of sea You view the birds of above when deep down your searching for love love of myst and mystic love of the blade to evade the accolade of life of strife stricken with sorrow the life you made as a renegade. People pray to feel this way seeking the meals, zeal, and deals of the day they attain the limelight with nothing to say and nothing to play, if something, with profound delay The efforts of many are subpar Striving for prestige without getting far; The crowd scoffs at your valiant attempt As you height off you develop contempt. The standards of the world guile you to swirl Similar to an oyster enclosing her pearl took you in what a sin , imbued you thin , no a kin, spat you out with a sonorous bellow down a common road with an uncommon fellow while your peers enjoyed to mellow an incessant goad to continue the road of fun with a smile you deeply reminisce it wasn?t worthwhile it is hard to find people to please that?s why you venture to the crystalline waters and turquoise seas Pleasure always feels like a breeze In truth its merely a tease

"Xanadu" Rush "Do It Again" Steely Dan Come Sail Away" Styx "Baba O'Reaily" The Who Anything really exceeding forty seconds of instrumentals I consider long so I'm pretty impatient and here are my picks.

The Very Best of Cream

"Hotel California" The Eagles "Bohemian Rhapsody" Queen "Come Sail Away" Styx "Staiway to Heaven" Led Zepelin "Under the Bridge" The Red Hot Chili Peppers These are my favorite single songs in seriatem.

Nirvana spraked the grunge movemnent in the late eighties. Albums such as Bleach, Nevermind, and In Utero make them the best grunge band of all time. Moreover, they have the hits to prove it such as Lithium, Smells Like Teen Spirit, Rape Me and Come as You Are. In addition, their image appealed to more people than the image of their grunge counterparts such as Alice in Chains and Stone Temple Pilots. Soundgarden is second Superunkown is awesome.