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KILLER!
!!!! I know what you are (were) going through dude, and I know that this song is very heartfelt and full of emotion, I say kudos to you hombre!! Keep it up...and on a side note, I REALLY HOPE YOU WIN THE SONG WRITTING CONTEST AT THE BEAR!!YEAH ROB!
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OK, this one is about what has been goin on with me and my GF since I started going out with her, I hate it when people try and take another GF, it pisses me off and I am tired of that [bleep]!! Pardon my language, its just I am really mad right now...anyways here it is, its calle "Take a step back (Before I step you back)"
Take a Step back (Before I step you back)
[Verse 1]
I see the way you look at her, the lust in your eyes.
I know what you want from her, but you can?t have it.
I KNOW you can?t have it from her
You see the way she looks at me, the love in her eyes
You can?t see, you don?t have a chance.
{Chorus}
Take a step back before I step you back
Take a step forward, and feel my wrath
Make a pass at her, and you?ll feel pain
Try something, and die
Take a step?BACK!!
[Verse 2]
I?ve seen what you try and do with her,
I know what you try, when I?m not around
I know what you want from her, you can?t have it
You know she?s with me, you know she is happy
Take a step BACK!
{Chorus}
Take a step back before I step you back
Take a step forward, and feel my wrath
Make a pass at her, and you?ll feel pain
Try something, and die
Take a step?BACK!!
[Verse 3]
I know what you think?
You think she is another piece of meat.
You think she is just another trophy
You think she is easy,
But I know she is a woman, pure and innocent
And I know I lover her and she loves me
{Chorus}
Take a step back before I step you back
Take a step forward, and feel my wrath
Make a pass at her, and you?ll feel pain
Try something, and die
Take a step?BACK!!
[Verse 4]
We see you stare, waiting for me to leave
I see you try and move closer to her
I see you reach out and touch her
I also see her reject you, she doesn?t want you
You should see, She loves me!
{Chorus}
Take a step back before I step you back
Take a step forward, and feel my wrath
Make a pass at her, and you?ll feel pain
Try something, and die
Take a step?BACK!!
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The Darkness "Permission to Land"
Tenatious D
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Well here is a list for ya...
How about....
"Touche" by Godsmack
"Home" by Three Days Grace
"Cold" by Crossfade
"Pain" Jimmy Eat World
"Falls to Pieces" Velvet Revolver
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I am not sure but it could possibly be something by Jet, or something like that...it sounds familiar.
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Truer Words...never spoken my young grasshopper!!! that was good, really good...Keep it up, and enjoy your stay here at Song Facts
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That would be great, I'd love to hear it to music...
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The telebubbies
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Crossfade
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Onde está o amor? ::
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Rob, That was great!!! You should continue writting until the day you die, you have a nack with words dude!!
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BRAVO!
!! That was great, I liked the way you wrote that, it was very well done! Keep it up!! -
all in order....
1. Linkin Park
2. Evanescence
3. Three days Grace
4. Seether
5. Crossfade
6. Fuel
7. Our Lady Peace
8. Disturbed
9. The darkness
10. Tenacious D
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Well for me, it all depends on my mood, if I'm in a bad mood, its something like Korn, or Seether, if I'm depressed its something like Evanescence or something, and so on and so forth... But there are those times when a song will come into my head and I want to listen to it.
My CD's (I only have 30 or so) I have in my CD case with my most listened to first and my least listened to last, so I always know which one I want and such, its a good way when you have a 40 minute bus ride to school every morning.
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"Theif" - Our Lady Peace
"Breakdown" - Tantric
"I walk Alone" - Oleander
"Flavour of the week" - American Hi-Fi
"temptations" - tea Party
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OK, this is my newest one, I'd like some feedback please because it helps me become a better writer, spank you, Marko. here it is, Enjoy!!!
Broken and used
[Verse 1]
It?s all over now, I can?t continue this way
You never wanted to stay
You were in this to bring me down
If it was for the best?why do I wear this frown?
You tore me down, kicked and hurt me
I guess its true? love is blind.
Everything was perfect in my mind
{Chorus}
I guess I should thank you
You showed me to stand on my own feet
I stand here today separate from your deceit
I know within me there was no defeat
You left me standing, battered and bruised
Broken and used, I refuse to love you!
[Verse 2]
Now here on the trail of memories
This is a constant reminder of better times
The days where I was in an eternal high
But I guess that trail has died
All because of your lies
{Chorus}
I guess I should thank you
You showed me to stand on my own feet
I stand here today separate from your deceit
I know within me there was no defeat
You left me standing, battered and bruised
Broken and used, I refuse to love you!
[Verse 3]
There was a time when love was in me
Now all that?s left is shattered hate
And yet I can?t live without you
Still, to this day?
I don?t know why I?m so far away
I guess deep down?
I still love you (repeat 2X)
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Welcome ma'am and welcome to the family, please limit showers to 15 minutes, and DONT USE ALL THE HOT WATER!!!
Anyways, Welcome to songfacts, and have a blast...its addictive!!
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"Love is the only invincable feeling,
Pure, yet haunted,
given its the only thing we need
but when given too freely from the needy
we dont want it,
So we lose it,
Spend our days tying to find it,
when we find it we spend our days walking blinded,
Blinded by happiness, Jealousy for the most part confused,
Hate to love it, but I do, and them are the love sick...Blues"
That is the spoken part at the end of "Love sick Blues" by Kyprios I love this song right now, its a rap song but I'll deal with it!!!
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This one I wrote after me and my Girlfreind got into an agruement over stupid things that escolated into me saying harsh things about her, and now she isn't talking to me!! ::...anyways here it is...enjoy
Why, Oh, Why!
[Verse #1]
So it seems I have gone and screwed things up again
It never surprise?s me, it happens all the time
It seems I have let a good thing slip between my fingers again
I feel I have a cloud of mistakes hanging high over my head
I cannot see the end of it for I am blinded by your love
Your love I will never see again because I have screwed it up again
{Chorus}
Why, oh, why do I always mess it up?
Why, oh, why does it always hurt?
Why, oh, why can?t I finally get a break?
Why oh why?why oh why?
Why oh why?why oh why?
[Verse #2]
I said things I shouldn?t have said?
I did things I never should have done?
I went places I never should have gone?
I screwed things up?.
Things I never should have screwed up!
Now I stand here looking for you?
I am so far away you can never see me.
{Chorus}
Why, oh, why do I always mess it up?
Why, oh, why does it always hurt?
Why, oh, why can?t I finally get a break?
Why oh why?why oh why?
Why oh why?why oh why?
[Verse #3]
I never meant to hurt you?
I never meant to make you cry?
I never meant to make you feel low?
I only wanted your happiness
I only wanted?your love!
{Chorus}
Why, oh, why do I always mess it up?
Why, oh, why does it always hurt?
Why, oh, why can?t I finally get a break?
Why oh why?why oh why?
Why oh why?why oh why?
(I only wanted your love)
(I only wanted your love)
(I only wanted your love)
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The answer is simple...first one I liked that was easy to access
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Do you have some sort of Comparison as to who they may sound like so I can kinda compare the two and see from there???
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I dont know, I am sceptical, but could it be this one??
TITLE: Seven
ARTIST: Revis
ALBUM: Places for Breathing
It's all over
It's all over now
The seal is broken
Creatures spoken now
I hope you come up to heaven right now
It's all over
It's all over now
Can I be changed?
Or am I the same
It's all over
It's all over now
No room for hiding
We're children fighting now
And hope you come up to heaven right now
It's all over
It's all over now
Can I be the same?
The rain is falling
The rain is falling now
Today we're leaving
Our souls are calling now
The stars on his right holding seven right now
The rain is falling
The rain is falling now
Can I be changed?
Or am I the same
It's all over
It's all over now
No room for hiding
We're children fighting now
And hope you come up to heaven right now
It's all over
It's all over now
I dont know, its a shot in the dark, if this isn't it, then I have NO CLUE I apologize, its been pretty well all week of me looking, and I have come up empty on all accounts, sorry EA. ::
Marko
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"So Far Away" - Staind
"So Far Away" - Crossfade
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I'd have to say that Outside by Staind is probably one of the best because of its immortallity no matter the age it will always be good you could be 90 years old and you'll look back on it and say WOW THATS A GOOD SONG!! Its a song that everyone probably likes, Young people, Old people, Middle aged people, everybody can relate to it some way or another, I love this song, no matter what song I am into at the time, Outside is still a great song.
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Don?t Know What I?m Holding On To
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Don?t Know What I?m Holding On To
[Verse 1]
When I look at what?s wrong with the world today
Feelings making me wanna slip away,
You don?t understand words hurt more
They hurt more coming from your mouth
I can feel this pain move in
{Chorus}
Don?t know how I?m holding on
Don?t know what I?m holding on to
Then out of the blue, I see you
As I feel you break through
Suddenly everything is fine
Finally, something to my name, someone to call mine
[Verse 2]
I don?t know how people are so shallow
Some days it makes me wanna throw in the towel
Sometimes it seems I am walking with no direction
It feels like I have no real complexion
I walk down the street aimlessly
Some Times I can?t handle the stress
{Chorus}
Don?t know how I?m holding on
Don?t know what I?m holding on to
You are there, like an Angelic voice
Days I can?t live like this, without a choice?
I stand with you, alone with you.
[Verse 3]
This world is full of hate
Why is this world in this state
People always lay blame
They do it without knowing your name
Why must people be so ignorant?
{Chous}
Don?t know how I?m holding on
Don?t know what I?m holding on to
When I?m lost and confused I go to you
You set me free of these demons
And all of these dastardly Villains
I stand with you, alone with you
I stand-alone with?you!
This is my new one, I tihnk its one of my better ones!