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Hetfield

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  1. Not only have u had a brilliant and ballsy idea of a concept album, BUT the concept of the album rocks, Very deep and very cool

    this is a kewl example of good writing aswell, sticking to the subject, and making sense but still making a lot of it very methodical, good job!! :guitar:

  2. a little song i wrote when i was on a bus, i saw a bloke shopping for a headstone and for a moment my mind entered his and i felt an incredible sadness wash over me, ITs about dissilusienment and loss of all the good things in life from an early age to adulthood.

    Verse 1:

    There stands a broken man

    a bunch of lillys in his hand

    staring at the stone below

    letting all his sadness flow

    The worst feeling in this case

    is the look of sadness in his face

    his eyes they show the scars of life

    this constant and unending strife

    Chorus:

    Reach out before it is too late

    Dont let him fall, but dont isolate

    Stop him before he runs aground

    All he needs is his friends around

    Verse 2:

    Here lies a broken dream

    Caught up in lifes hopeless scheme

    snatched away by ruthles fate

    on friday of the 13th date

    dillusions of a boy

    as he outgrows his favrout toy

    the world becomes so cold and mean

    to this ever growing early teen

    Chorus:

    Reach out before it is too late

    Dont let him fall but dont isolate

    Cath him before he runs aground

    all he needs is his friends around

    And there lies a broken man

    The world has took him from his pram

    it tossed him round and made him old

    it cooled him down and made him cold

    It showed him how cruel life can be

    It told him what its like to bleed

    It dragged him up and let him go

    But now he doesnt want to KNOOOOOOOW!!!

    The End xx

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