Hetfield
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Thank u very much kind sir!
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very nice man, and at the same time sobering and shocking
I particullarly like the fact that a lot of it doesnt rhyme
it kinda reminds me of Mmm Mmm Mmm by the crash test dummies, can anyone else see where im coing from on that point?
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I love the positive "[bleep] everyone if they dont like it" sentiments in this song man, Im sick to death of hearing people whinge about [bleep] in songs, whereas u choose to stand up for urself man, good for you!
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a little song i wrote when i was on a bus, i saw a bloke shopping for a headstone and for a moment my mind entered his and i felt an incredible sadness wash over me, ITs about dissilusienment and loss of all the good things in life from an early age to adulthood.
Verse 1:
There stands a broken man
a bunch of lillys in his hand
staring at the stone below
letting all his sadness flow
The worst feeling in this case
is the look of sadness in his face
his eyes they show the scars of life
this constant and unending strife
Chorus:
Reach out before it is too late
Dont let him fall, but dont isolate
Stop him before he runs aground
All he needs is his friends around
Verse 2:
Here lies a broken dream
Caught up in lifes hopeless scheme
snatched away by ruthles fate
on friday of the 13th date
dillusions of a boy
as he outgrows his favrout toy
the world becomes so cold and mean
to this ever growing early teen
Chorus:
Reach out before it is too late
Dont let him fall but dont isolate
Cath him before he runs aground
all he needs is his friends around
And there lies a broken man
The world has took him from his pram
it tossed him round and made him old
it cooled him down and made him cold
It showed him how cruel life can be
It told him what its like to bleed
It dragged him up and let him go
But now he doesnt want to KNOOOOOOOW!!!
The End xx
Curtain Call
in Creative Writing
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Not only have u had a brilliant and ballsy idea of a concept album, BUT the concept of the album rocks, Very deep and very cool
this is a kewl example of good writing aswell, sticking to the subject, and making sense but still making a lot of it very methodical, good job!! :guitar: