MuzikTyme Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 Harry shivered as the cold shower water splashed upon his back. Nothing like a cold shower, huh, Harry, to forget one's problems? Believe me, Harry had his share and then some. The huge gambling debt, combined with the mistress' pregnancy only gave proper reason to shiver under the cold shower water that particular evening. As he pressed the liquid soap dispenser he didn't notice . . . . . . to be continued. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MuzikTyme Posted October 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 . . . that the galvanized coating of the button had somehow been eaten away, like the rust of an abandoned vehicle. AHH, the shower felt good until the burning sensation kicked in. Harry wondered for one tenth of a thousandth of a second . . . then, wandered through his mind only to realize . . . . . . to be continued Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MuzikTyme Posted October 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 . . . that his wife, Margaret, knew. But knew what, Harry? That you secretly had an affair with her former boy-friend? Or, even more interesting, that you even allowed his mother to join in? But we're not thinking about that now, are we, Harry? So, watch in total horror as . . . . . . to be continued. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 Muzik...I'm waiting...you have my curiosity up... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MuzikTyme Posted October 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 So, watch in total horror as . . . . . . the skin from your hands peel off before understanding that Margaret filled the dispenser with hydro-chloric acid. There wasn't time for the brain's neuro-transmitters to even remotely register pain. No, the horror was that which was left of Harry, swimming, sickly, down the drain . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Levis Posted October 24, 2007 Report Share Posted October 24, 2007 Gruesome Funny though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shawna Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 I loved that, Muzik! How gruesomely appropriate for this time of year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blind-fitter Posted October 25, 2007 Report Share Posted October 25, 2007 Indeed: I'd quite forgotten that it's the "International Day of Vengeful Wives" sometime this week. Thanks for the tip-off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayzor Posted October 28, 2007 Report Share Posted October 28, 2007 Muzik! That is so cool! I was totally seeing everything! Love the gore! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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