MuzikTyme Posted October 15, 2007 Report Share Posted October 15, 2007 As she shook her head she knew Before the morning light of dew Back in the black of, shiny and new . . . 'Twould be a place as only dreams would allow Only hopes Only wishes Only things which have fishes She liked seafood . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenacious_Peaches Posted October 15, 2007 Report Share Posted October 15, 2007 Holy macaroni, it's Muzik! This poem is just as enigmatic as you are, my darling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blue Fish Posted October 15, 2007 Report Share Posted October 15, 2007 Well it's different! I kinda like it, not sure why though, it's different! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucky Posted October 15, 2007 Report Share Posted October 15, 2007 I liked it. It made me smile. I don't know if that was the intention, but I'll take any reason for smiling as reason enough! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Laurie_ Posted October 16, 2007 Report Share Posted October 16, 2007 Nice to see you Marcus!....next time stay awhile, we miss you....very nice poem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MuzikTyme Posted October 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2007 Peachy, if only, somehow, there was a way to get the other Peanuts' dancers in your almost perfect avatar!~ But I'll say my favourite one dominates it now, anyway. Ya gotta love the side-to-side head sway accompanied by the chicken-leg shuffle. Bluefish, Lucky & Laurie: Comments most appreciated and hope y'all understood the poem 'cause I'm certain I never will . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayzor Posted October 16, 2007 Report Share Posted October 16, 2007 Dude... it's like... paranormal, man! So freaky, dude... like trippin on acid with a lava lamp going in the corner of the room! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MuzikTyme Posted October 16, 2007 Author Report Share Posted October 16, 2007 I once became a lava light . . . no, really! Glad you liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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